Pony pun time!!!

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  1. Oatmeal

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    Hmm... DROP THAT SPOON MISTER!!! >:(
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    Hey there mares and stallions. I introduce to you "Pony Pun Time".

    (I'm still deciding on the logo thing. Another choice was this:

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    But inside a Loony Toons circle. :D)

    Here, I'll post ideas for comics, and comics themselves (In a link) that I make. Heck, feel free to throw some of yours in too; comics and ideas. :D

    IDEAS SO FAR:

    Prices of rainbows rise.

    Derpy's Oops:
    - Derpe tries to be a cloud destroyer pony thing, but ends up creating an apocalypse. I was thinking like... She's doing cool turns and stuff and it looks all cool or whatever. Then it cuts to a city/town and there's chaos everywhere and she put it in the shape of a skull. And the skull looks all scary and bright red eyes.

    ???
    - Derpy was smart back then but discovers something that makes her dumb.

    Care Package
    - There's a war, and as a last defence against the enemies, the allies send in a crate that has a pony. They open it and can't kill it due to its cuteness, but then it turn and kills them all in the camp.

    D.T.B. Hooves
    - Why ponies hate computers... The keys are too small for their hooves to press to type. WHY HOOVES?!?! WHY?!?! (Create new pony, Drops-things-because-of-hooves Pony)

    ???
    - What was the name of the first state founded by ponies? Mane... -_-

    Why There Are No Humans
    - Why are there no humans in Equestria... Well... you see... Long ago, ponies and humans were in a war, and there were many casualties. So they had to climb Mount Everest and put the flag on top to prove that they were the greatest boxer to come out of boxing since Rocky VIII. So now that they had a treaty, they separated into groups to see who would be the lone survivor and who was the best. But then they voted off shebgbsdg and found themselves trapped in another ice age where tigers and elephants lived and talked to each other... So yeah, I'm doing pretty good now days, how about you?...

    Derpy The Spy
    - Twilight hires Derpy to follow Pinky around to find out more about her twitches and stuff. Derpy's terrible at hiding and after 3-4 frames Pinky finally turns around and yell-asks Derpy why she's following her. Derpy: I forgot... OR It's a cardboard Derpy and it's just been in the same spot in each frame throughout the comic OR It's a cardboard Derpy and Pinky's scream knocks it down and Derpy's hiding behind it.

    Derp n' Pink
    - Derpy helps Pinky pull a prank on another pony and they put some tape in a toaster to keep it down for a little longer. The pony puts the toast in and waits... The oven explodes with a huge explosion and Pinky stares at Derpy. Derpy: WOW... These candles are great, huh?. (TNT)

    Water Water Everywhere
    - Why ponies don't believe in bottled water... Their hooves can't grab them. WHY HOOVES?!?! WHY?!?!

    Derp n' Pink: Balcony
    - Derpy and Pinky pull a prank on another pony by removing some nails from a table on a balcony so it falls and drops the things on the table. Derpe: What are these for? Pinky: We pulled those out to make the table fall. Derpe: Oh... What about the ones I found all over the balcony? Pinky: o_O WhAt?!?! KABOOM!!! Whole balcony falls.

    A Princess Dash
    - A male pony and female pony rescue princess Rainbow Dash... When they enter the top tower after defeating the evil king, Dash tackles the female companion... (I couldn't resist. HAHAHAHAHA :p)

    Derp n' Pink: Knock Knock!!!
    - Derpy and Pinky pull a prank on another pony by playing ding-dong-ditch. They knock on the door and run. They jump behind a bush and Pinky looks over to her left... Derpy outline... *SLAM!!!* Derpy comes back and says: She was nice. I gave her some candles :) Pinky (Crazy-confused face) Wait wha- KABOOM!!! House explodes. Pinky with annoyed face: Why do I bring you along on these?

    Spilt Soda
    - D.T.Hooves again and she/he is watching T.v. and reaches for a soda can... WHY HOOVES?!?! WHY?!?!



    I'll post more later, but for now, here's one. Not the best I've made, but hey, it's the first one and only one that's not a cutout. :D

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    Darn it swore I posted here -.-
    Sorry Pac.

    Great idea, glad someone has some motivation - let you be an example to all <3
    + Jewels/Rep!

    I think the first one should be Rarity not Twilight - and I'm not sure if it's suitable for a mainstream audience hmm...
    The second one just has me ugh... perplexed.

    But generally I like the name, I like the idea and I'll be sure to post my own ideas in due course (when I've had some time to think of some)!

    Good Job Pac :)
     
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    I'm pretty sure the second one is answering the first one, Ass -> Donkey ;) Hence why it's Twilight in the first one.
     
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    Hmm... DROP THAT SPOON MISTER!!! >:(
    lol, I probably should have combined them. lol

    Sorry bout that. :D

    Hmm... Rarity huh? You sure that's not a little biased coming from you? :derpe:

    Honestly though, I wanted to put the funniest serious face that said, "Who cares" in the middle of the circle. For that ironic look. :D And Twilight had the best face...
     
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    Well the involvement or rarity would just be closer to spike's character - but it works either way, as ts seems to be more of the equivelant of a sister to him (and thus he'd be more prone to joking weird like that)
     
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    Hmm... DROP THAT SPOON MISTER!!! >:(
    Hmm... I could work on it later and cutout rarity and paste her with the donkey. That would actually make a double joke. His crush, and the donkey. lol

    I was feeling lazy though. :derpe:

    This is going to be the only one, for right now, that isn't a cutout. :D
     
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    Fair claim! I love Rarity but so does Spike... That's his 'crush' that is why I think it would be funnier ^^
     
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    Hmm... DROP THAT SPOON MISTER!!! >:(
    But why would Rarity have a donkey? :derpe:
     
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    Why would Twilight Sparkle have a donkey? It goes for both really.
     
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    I'm doing it! I'm doing it!
    A comic is in the works and coming along nicely (cut-out ofc).
    What about everypony else?
     
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    Hmm... DROP THAT SPOON MISTER!!! >:(
    The comics WOULD be coming faster, if it wasn't for this new game the peoplez at LBPC introduced to me. Have y'all ever heard of Spiral Knights?

    It's like, right up my alley, and is a little addicting to me. lol

    It makes me want to play Zelda sooooooo bad.
     
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    Then play Zelda. Get a n64 emulator, download OoT, and play it. It's the best of the bunch anyway :p
     
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    Idk about that, Wind Waker comes pretty close to beating it.
    Really depends on if you like the ship travel mechanic or not, I always found it pretty odd why they'd put Epona in OoT if you can only use her in such a (relatively) small area, though it's nice to see they expanded that in Majora's Mask.
     
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    Hmm... DROP THAT SPOON MISTER!!! >:(
    Actually... This gave me some ideas for some comics. :D

    Whether or not it was off topic, HAZAA FOR NEW IDEAS!!! :omg:
     
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    It's finished - nothing special but it was an experience nonetheless XD
    I kinda rushed the end though, guess it could've been a lot funnier :|

    I have the PSD if anyone wants to change it (I warn you it's rather messy!)
     
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    Hmm... DROP THAT SPOON MISTER!!! >:(
    AHH!!! WHAT DID YOU DO GREY!!! That's like 5 different possible comics in one.

    Derpy crashes the party.

    Derpe's PHD.

    Derpe Fashionista

    Why Applejack thinks she's crazy.

    Why Rainbow Dash thinks she's crazy.

    lol. The muffins could have been made of something bad. Like mud, flowers, maybe a mYsTeRiOuS ingredient. Then the Twilight pic could be used to show her almost throwing up and saying, "What's in these muffins Derpe?" Derpe: "Love and sunshines. Why?"

    I still liked it, but maybe you shouldn't have rushed the ending though. It could have ended a lot more funny ways. And the ending is where it should be the funniest.

    EDIT: You put Eveypony.com underneath the Cloudsdale theme.
     
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    Tbh, I think it drags on a bit too much. I don't think the idea itself needs to be changed but I find comics to be a lot more effective when they they get straight to the point.
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    There's a few parts in there that I think you could merge into a single frame and I'd actually forgo some of the text as well.

    Also, poor Derpy.
     
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    It's a lot more time consuming than you'd think - thanks for the feedback but have absolutely no intention of editing it or doing another, though I agree with both of you, a trim ending and shorter strip as a whole would've been a lot better! :derpe:

    If someone wants to finish/tweak it themselves I'm more than happy to give them the psd - but for now I am going to go rest... *starts snoring*
     
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    I can imagine, you wouldn't have caught me finding all the appropriate pics for all the frames. Let alone coming up with the idea in the first place :derpe:

    Hmm... I may as well give it a go, nothing ventured nothing gained, right?
     

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