Something I came up with..

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  1. Danvid23

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    My name is Dx-17. I am a private under the 312'th legion, under the command of captain ortz. I am being deployed to Raxus prime, to deal with a droid occupation of a small Twilek village. According to witnesses, they have murdered many children and women, and have taken the men hostage. I Am currently above the planets surface, landing a couple clicks out from the village. I hope I survive, and help these poor twilek. Dx-17, out.

    (Continue?)
     
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    Sparkypony Antisocial ponyality disorder

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    We should move this to RP.
     
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    Whoa! Danvid23, you're back! I can't believe it. How are you?

    Yes, please continue. Is this a fiction you're writing? Or is it more of a role-playing thing? Either way, it should go in the appropriate section.

    EDIT: Star Wars is awesome.
     
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    I'm with Sparky on this one, move it to the RP area.
     
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    A role play would mean that it is him with others. Perhaps he wants to just write a story on his own rather than do an RP. It's one of the best way to cultivate your mind. RP's get too hassling after awhile. People posting at random times or never posting at all. Being relied on to post all the time.
    I say go with a story man.
     
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    Its more of a story.. But I didn't know where to post it... :/
     
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    ( will continue here). As I said before, I am DX-13. We are currently landed near the small village I... :Explosion!:. I slowly turned to see our ship crash into the air, as this happened, my instincts told me to ignore it, but I decided to check for survivors... I ran towards the ship a couple hundred meters away, but as this occurred, a SBD began shooting at me. I quickly cocked my rifle, and dived behind it, shooting directly at the middle section of the back forehead. The droid merely collapsed, but it suddenly turned, and jumped on top of me..
     
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    RP goes in the RP forum.

    Stories (fanfics) go in the fanfiction forum.

    Woop!
     
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    Err.. I thought ff was for mlpfanfic only?
     
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    It is. I think that General Discussion is fine for this. It wouldn't really make sense to post it anywhere else, and those that don't want to read it will have to deal because I like Star Wars, and you should continue your story. :smile:
     
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    Hmmm... Ok.
     
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    Hi
     
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    Well. Hello Miggy.
     
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    (Continued). The droids mechanical arms pushed down on my neck, causing my head to turn to the side. I could feel my bones crackling, and before I Took out my dogtag, a bullet passed through the droids head. "Private! Private! Get up!!!!" I regognized the voice of commander ornz, and pulled myself up.
     

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