Looking for a lyrics writer

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  1. Bey-Heart

    Bey-Heart Guess who's banished?

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    I'm currently working on my own MLP composition. I have the melody done, and I'd like somebody to write lyrics for it, if able. I would try myself, but I'm not to good at that... Would anybody be willing to help out?
     
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    let's hear the melody and what theme you want on it.
     
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    I wrote these a while back, I just quickly tidied and changed a few things.



    Verse (would require variants)

    Fluttershy...
    Don’t leave me lyin' here
    Fluttershy...
    Don’t leave me cryin' here
    Oh, Fluttershy...
    Is it worth another try?
    Fluttershy...
    Please tell me...
    How long,
    Before I Die?

    Chorus

    For there’s no way of knowing
    No way of showing
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    Where - I'm - Going to!
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    Yeah there's no way of knowing
    No way of showing
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    How - I - feel - about you!
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    Yeah there's no way of Showing
    No way of going, where you're - going - too.
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    But now I know that I'm going
    and I know that I'm showing
    My love, will always - be - true!
    -

    In final chorus add line at end 'I'll never stop loving you'


    The only reason I chose Fluttershy is because it rhymes with Butterfly (the original wording), but feel free to use them or any variant if they fit, otherwise yeah.. Without hearing the music I can't be of much help ;)
     
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    I could have a try. A listen of what it sounds like would help though.
     
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    Bey-Heart Guess who's banished?

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    Well I was going to post how it sounds if somebody was willing to help out. I'll post it up this weekend and we'll go from there.
     
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    I'd glady help, but like with the others, it kind of depends on the style of music you're using, e.g. I'd never be able to write a rock music composition without some kind of reference

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    Bey-Heart Guess who's banished?

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    I've decided to go back and make some edits, so no more lyrics. If the mods could close this thread, I would appreciate it.
     
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    Fair enough.

    ~Thread Closed~
     
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