You have a different attitude to my 200 prereaders. Please, describe what you felt was missing. I will be sure to fix it in the future if I get time off riding quad bikes through London with supermodels.
The first would had love, care, plot and tons of plot. The sequel kinda just wanted to get your wings up. I prefer the original.
Don't worry, I asked the director to remove scene 6 act 9. I managed to hire the entire Double Rainbow team to make it. Mandopony is writing an original soundtrack for it.
I assume you were one of thr few to read it when it was first released? Like Ocarina of Time, no sequal can match the feeling. Do you get a Wind Waker-y feel from the sequal? Some love it's style, some it's play while there are a few that dislike it for not being true to the original. Thank you for the feedback. I may write a poem.
Well, the fanfic got some fan-fanfics, and they were really badly written. Full of grammar mistakes and the likes... Sometimes, people just shouldn't ruin something beautiful like that.
Also, to translate the steamy scene in your fanfiction to film, it'd have to be 5 hours long.....how do we cut that down?
Hmm. Well, if we remove scenes 5 and 7, we can knock off a section. We have to have 1, 2 and 3. 4 can be cut and put with 6.0-6.8. It's taking shape.
Spoiler: wut The level of sarcasm in this thread. I can't. If you're looking to turn it into a trilogy, I'd be happy to add some of my work.
but act 4 is where we establish the reason we feel the need to want this to continue, to offer the respite in this rollercoasdter of an epic
Why wouldn't it be legal? No scientific evidence shows that having such a big wingboner causes health issues. Prehaps a loss of blood to the brain, but there's nothing wrong with that.
I dont have wings though.Im a unicorn.Thats not the problem. The law states the only Molestia may make porn movies for public viewing.