Welcome back Eight Star! Nice to see someone returning, but then again, they always do, mainly because:
Hello again, Nurse Luna! Is it time for my sponge bath? It's probably been a couple hundred years since I've had a good catering to from an alucornus, and fear not - I know how to be civil around royalty.
Rock? No, no, a sponge! The squishy kind! Last time I was catered to by an alucornus was probably around 230 years ago. Princesses are quite the premium. Or else I would welcome one every month.
*magics out a large bathing bucket and a sponge, cleaning off the muck from eight star, then sees a hellfire octopus crawl out of eight stars hair* eww.... *continues cleaning after throwing the octopus to who knows where*
I've seen more than one. I smashed them into fine dust. The skeletons and zombies it had died. I forgot what i smashed them with.I still have it though.I think its in my basement.I am NOT going down there.
I think i saw another one exactly like yours and reduced it to dust. Took a few good hits.Wait why are we RP'ing here?
Oh, you were RPing? I'm sorry. You can dig up info on ES over in the character database, (I think.) Otherwise I just stick with not explaining everything in a long drawn out "OMIGAWD I'MMA MARY SUE" sort of way.
Hah..you can test out to see of your OC is a mary sue. http://sparky-the-pony.deviantart.com/journal/OC-test-iambored-328048577 Just copy it and erase my answers.
Name : {N} Is it your real name ? ( +5 ) {N} Is it your real nickname ? ( +3 ) {N} Is it a human name at all ? ( +2 ) {N} Does it have to do with their cutie mark ? ( -2 ) Total here:0 Appearance : {N} Does it have a canon character's mane? ( +2 ) {N} Is it Rainbow Dash's? ( +4 ) {2} How many colors does its mane have? ( +2 for each color past 1 ) {N} Does it sparkle or glitter? ( +5 ) {Y} Unicorn? ( +3 ) {N} Pegasus? ( +2 ) {N} Earth Pony? ( -1 ) {N} Alicorn? ( +10 ) {N} Does it's base coat have more than 1 color? ( +4 for each extra color, a gradient counts as 1 extra ) {N} Are its eyes deeply moving to other characters? ( +3 ) {N} Are they purple? ( +2 ) {N} Are they described in thought out metaphors such as "The fiery red of deep passion" ( +3 ) {N} Are they known throughout Equestria for their beauty? N {Y} Are they male? ( +1 ) {Y} Is their occupation something other than scout, guard, or carriage puller? ( +1 ) Total here:7 Cutie Mark : {N} Does it ever change? ( +10 ) (the numbers can appear to but it is more of an illusion) {N} Do they have more than 1 special talent? ( +4 ) {N} Does it cover the entire flank ? ( +2 ) ( Example : Luna's CM ) {N} Is it something lame and not very impressive ? ( -3 ) ( Example : Cleaning Windows ) {Y} Is it something totally amazing that nopony else can do ? ( +2 ) {N} Are they the best at what they do ? ( +5 ) {N} Is it similar/same in appearance as one of the main characters? ( +3 ) Total : 2 Relationships : {Y} Are they in a romantic relationship? ( +3 ) {N} More than one? ( +3 ) {N} With a canon character ? ( +4 ) {N} With any of the Princesses ? ( +8 ) {N} With any of the Mane 6 ? ( +4 ) Total : 3 {Y} Are your character & a main character friends ? ( +1 ) {Y} Is it one of the mane 6 ? ( +2 ) {N} Are your character and the Mane 6 pony better friends than she is with the rest of the mane 6 ? ( +2 ) {N} Are they related to a well known/canon/main character ? ( +5 ) {N} Is it royalty ? ( +3 ) Total : 3 Personality {N} Do they seem to have the same personality as one of the Mane 6? ( +2 ) {N} Is it Rainbow Dash? ( +1 ) {N} Are they extremely nice, and never really do anything wrong? ( +3 ) {N} They are loved by everypony? ( +5 ) {N} Except one? ( +2 ) {N} Are they hated by everypony? ( +5 ) {N} Except one? ( +1 ) {Y} Do they have a serious personality flaw that hinders them significantly ? ( -6 ) Total : -6 Final Sum Of : 9, if I read it right. Marking Scheme : 0 - 8 Your character is kind of boring, spice it up a little! 9 - 12 Well balanced! 12 - 18 This is good for canon characters, but is really stretching it for an OC 19+ You might have to start over, your character seems to be a little too perfect to be credible. It missed like... all that my OC has to be powerful. There should be something that adds points for being immortal.
Is always In character, Even when he was abandoned by his family for being different than the rest. This character just happened to be a submission of mine for MLP:FIM season three. And I rather liked him. As for pompous, I'm friggin evil. Pompous is a given. And for far fetched. Ive seen allot worse in stories over at FIM Fiction. Besides Immortal evil will always fight and try to prove they are stronger than the rest of the Immortal evil. And A quote for the others. "Before light was even a mere current of electricity going through the supercomputer mind of the great creator, Darkness ruled everything. When light leaves Darkness will once again shed its shadow over the universe and rule all once more." And a less religious sounding version. "Darkness existed first, so light can just go back from where it came"
... This thread isn't about you. :derpe: Don't you realize it's far more evil to make friend who trust you, and people who will back you up? Then use them for your oen purposes while they don't even notice? Then they take the fall, and the only ones able to put it on you are the ones you've used? Though I digress; my battles occur on the plane of the ether, where magic is vibrant, and physical ideals like dark and light don't exist.
Once more Darkness is the absence of light. Therefore Darkness is nothing. I say to move this to visitor messages because this is a welcome thread not a bash on the one with a rational immortality clause thread. And as for you Eight, evil is widespread, No evil is more evil than other evil. And the only planes where Light and Dark do not coexist on are the planes on which they themselves exist. Ill point to what I said to Sparky. We can take this to visitor messages, instead of bashing one with a rational reason to his being of immortal. This being your welcome thread, and my having of welcomed you being done, I am done posting here. If you want to continue send me a visitor message, Ill happily continue. If not, oh well. I will have yet again been beaten down by the ignorance of others and possibly ignorance of my own.
