I drew Fluttershy for the third time yesterday, and I decided to share it with everyone on here. :3 I hope everyone likes it... Constructive critisism is welcomed, but blind hating will be ignored. I will be posting other things that I draw on here too...
The first two are very good. In the third picture, the proportions are slightly off, making Fluttershy seem thin and elongated. Your cross-hatching is nearly flawless. Did you use quill and ink or ballpoint pen?
These are very cute, although as Ridley already pointed out, the proportions are slightly off. Do you do them free-hand or sketch them out first? I can understand that anatomy can be hard if you're not drawing from a sketch.