Entering my shirts in Welovefine contest

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  1. Frost

    Frost Would You Kindly?

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    I like the one with no text. That's something I'd actually buy, and I'm the biggest tightwad you'd ever meet. Very nice.

    The pink spot on the bottom is looking a bit transparent though, since none of the other colors have any transparency I'm assuming it's an error.

    Normally I wouldn't be so critical, but attention to detail is critical if someone is going to buy a design... and I'd like to see you win. :smile:
     
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  2. Echoax

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    I'm really tired right now, that was the first go at it. I'll redo it when I wake up and can concentrate on it.

    I glad you guys like it.
     
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    Personally I like the Rainbow Dash shirt without text.

    Perhaps if you used a different outline or font for the text...
    Nope, I still can't see myself wearing it.

    Well, actually maybe...
    The text would just have to be about...
    (Somepony finish that statement).
     
  4. DanSze

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    Wait, the random idea actually worked? I was not expecting it to, honestly, considering that was just random suggestion based on the fact that modern art can be done in any number of ways, including explosives, so how hard can it be to do something modern-artsy?

    Anyways, no-text one is nice, even if I personally expected more RD colors.
     
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    No it's decided the final version will have no text in it.

    That was just the test DanSze. It will be redone when I wake up.
     
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    Version 3.

    Turns out I lied, I redid it instead of going to sleep.

    I used to colors from her mane, so the color are 100% right.

    [​IMG]
     
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    Bravo, Bravo.

    Such magnificence! Such Style!

    In other words: All of my money.
     
  8. Frost

    Frost Would You Kindly?

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    I like the change in color, yet the splashes seem to be dimished in size and quantity. Perhaps make the RBD silhouette smaller?

    Also, there is an invisible outline there where the paint stops that makes the design seem to be in a box. The free flowing, out of the box design the first one had was, in my opinion, its greatest appeal.



    Sorry for all the criticism, I feel like I'm being mean. Anyway...that's just my two cents.
     
  9. Echoax

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    I noticed that. I'll play around with it, to make it cool better. I'm forced to put it in the area they tell me to. I just download more brushes and I'm trying to give all the colors equal amounts.

    Your not being mean, your helping anything you have to say is a big help to me.

    Be on the lookout for version 4 in an hour or two.
     
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    I approve of this movement.
     
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    I also noticed that there's a distinct lack of red.
    That goes with the color balancing I guess.
     
  12. Echoax

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    It's there, It just got shuffled back. I will try my hardest to make equal color.

    EDIT:
    [​IMG]

    Still has the dumb box thing. I will make it look better, but I'm sleeping now. So it will have to wait.
     
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    That is a cool design! Colours are really eye-catching.
    But yeah, that box thing has to go...

    Hey, I liked your Trixie version 2 too, though its probably a bit late... Srry... Anyway, If i do vote, You'll have my vote! :grin:
     
  14. Double Rainbow "Dash"

    Double Rainbow "Dash" The Legendary TwiDash Shipper

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    Looks good, I'd want version 3/4.

    You should submit them now. :derpe: I still can't find them in the entries on the page.
     
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    The final Rainbow Dash shirt. I'm submitting this one.

    [​IMG]
     
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    I love, love, love it :omg:

    Maybe I will buy one, would be awesome to have this one.
     
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    I'm being picky amn't it?
    I'm not seeing very much red once again.
    Also the bottom blue looks a little messy.
     
  18. DoDo1234

    DoDo1234 The Awkward one

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    You mean that paint? I think its supposed to look like that :Trollestia: Only messing, I see what your saying, but I think that it looks great! nice one pixel, once again you create an awesome awesome thing!
     
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    I will alter the red then, but I've been up for 26 hours. I'll do it when I wake up.

    Thanks for pointing out the problems guys. It really helps.

    greyOne, be as picky as you can.
     
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    Hey, as Thomas Edison said:
    "I have not failed. I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work."

    Thinks like these take patience.
    Actually I believe he also said: "There is no substitute for hard work.",
    so that one works too.
     

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