My Fisrt Fanfik!!!

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  1. Tlent

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    Ive Nerver wirten a fanfik befor but i peopl say im a gud writer ok ok , so anyways caillu was at scool 1 day. But b4 that he was pleying with his dono saur .Then gilbert... told cailluo that his mommy was EVIL! Caillou was surpised that gibret cold talk, aned then also eh was surpize that mommy was EVIL! Caillou jump down alll the stairs in ONE jumped!! He went to teh daddies roombut daddy said he need to goed to school. So he tooked his backpak on and went ot the bus and he goed to school. but then Rosy was DRIVING the bus. Calloi said Rosey stahp!! u dont have an lisens! but rosie said I must Go throgh the poordal! Callou was suprisd that rosie culd talk so he sad OK littel sistur. And caillou went back on the bus. Outsied the bus was flying ailens taht wunted to steel his lunch but then caillou went the bus though the other portal and tehy then saw pinkypie. Pikypie cald him bald nd silly and mad ciallou MAADDDd!!! MAADDDd!!! And then caillou axenelly hit the expload button on the bus! all off a suddn momy cam in and safed caill and rosiy. Calliou said but i tot you were EVIL! But then girlbret was the axually EVIL! JK but caillo wok up in bed it was nitemare
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    so whats shoul happen nexT?!
     
  2. SirSPT

    SirSPT A Pony Every Pony Should Know
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    I don't think this is the right section for fanfics.

    Also,

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    Can someone translate this for me? It's nigh impossible for me to read.
     
  3. Narrow

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    It's in stupid.

    But obvious "troll" attempt is obvious. Stop trying so hard, kid.
     
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    This site has been trolled worse by better.
     
  5. Eight Star

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    This is not the right section for FanFictions. Please submit the fiction to the appropriate place so that our wonderful FanFiction Moderator may go over and approve it before it is posted for the archives.

    Thank you.
     
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