The Elements of Order

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  1. Dashie 1

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    These Ocs follow my non canon story of how there are 6 more elements of harmony that correspond with the mane6. I will eventually post stories on these characters if you're interested in helping write one message me thank you.
    Bright Star- Friendship
    Hotshot- Hope
    Waves- Happiness
    Rider- Trust
    Jetstream- Strength
    Softy- Care

    All these characters in my dimension are in relationships with each of the mane 6 if you match them together correctly I will tell you an awesome message.
     
  2. Fenris Rose

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    I'm going to warn you right now that you've committed two of the biggest sins in MLP OC-making.

    1. Creating new Elements of Harmony.
    -There are six Elements. No more, no less. They belong to the Mane Six. Nopony else.

    2. Canon X OC shipping.
    -Your OC is not canon. Your OC will never be canon. There is no way that a canon character would ever have a romantic interest in your OC. Ever.
    -Shipping your OC with one of the Mane Six or one of the princesses is downright egotistical.

    Also,
    Friendship = Magic - Because Friendship is Magic. They are literally the same thing in Equestria, making a second Element redundant.
    Hope = Generosity - I'm assuming that this has something to do with the idea of charity giving people hope. At least its not redundant.
    Happiness = Laughter - People laugh when they are happy. Not exactly the same, but close enough not to warrant a new Element.
    Trust = Loyalty - Loyal and trustworthy are synonyms. Another redundancy.
    Strength = Honesty - I'm not entirely sure what strength has to do with harmony, but Applejack's strong, so why not, right?
    Care = Kindness - Again, these words are synonyms.

    What you have are six Mary-Sues, which will almost certainly be universally disliked by other members of the fandom.
     
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    and if you dont know what mary sue means it means perfect in almost every way.

    so you pretty much just made almost every pony fanatic's dream. they're very own version of the mane six which is exactly what you did.and shipping you're oc with a canon character when theyre practically alike?bruh.even someone of a completely different fandom can tell you that you just screwed up EVERYTHING (no offense)
     
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    Alright, alright. He is new and probably hasn't read the rules. And if he has he could always also a mod or admin for help.
     

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