Red Heart

Published by Tyro D. Fox in the blog The Leather Bound Book. Views: 362


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I'm not one for Grimdark but this one caught my attention. It's talks about Nurse Red Hearts reason for being so glum and Berry Punch's reason for drinking excessively.
I'm sure you are all familiar with the "master race" ordeal. Many fan fics involve a great, violent, and bloody war involving the unicorn king. Well, this basically talks about the horrors two young fillies go through during this time. Stripped of their innocence, will the two fillies lose sight of who they once were and become just another casualty of war, or will they grow closer.

Personally, I believe that this story makes sense. The way it portrays the pain and suffering the two fillies went through and how they ended up where they are today is a sheer work of art. The blood and gore adds to the fear and made me feel as though they would not make it through this long and pitiful war to determine who the "Master Race" really is. If I could rate this story on a scale of one to five; it would most definitely be a five.
Oct 15, 2012
  • Tyro D. Fox
    Tyro D. Fox Oct 15, 2012
    That's interesting but what did you think about the fan fic? This is something you feel is interesting but there's no actual review here.
  • Glorious Rex's Apostle
    Glorious Rex's Apostle Oct 15, 2012
    Problems with this is that you're just telling us concept, not actually reviewing elements such as how the concept was executed, if the characters were engaging, and if the plots and settings made sense. It would also be in your best interests to post a DIRECT link, instead of just fanfic's hp.
  • Tyro D. Fox
    Tyro D. Fox Oct 15, 2012
    Put better than I did. Don't be disheartened Redmon. Take this on board and try again.
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