Song Rewrites

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  1. Lord Architect

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    I am rewriting a few songs from he fandom. One of which is Vicious Lies. I need somepony to help with the process. Any takers?
     
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    I could help u. But id like to know but i would like to know more about what has to be done :)
    And i got one question is this what u want to do is similar to this:



    Or i just dont get the point :p
     
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    OK, your video, is the original I believe. I am completely parodying. Think instead of Celestia being the target of the song, think Bill Cipher as the target.
     
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    If ur making parody i can help u for sure in rewritng. There are only 2 things :i need to read sth more about Bill Cipher (Well i was never intrested in Gravity falls) and i need to listen some more times that video or just read the lyrics :p

    I dont know if it would be helpfull but Im a fan of Depeche Mode.
     
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    Lyrics!!!!
    You've got no alibi
    Cause everything you've said is a lie
    You're coming before half past twelve
    Its deeper into our minds you delve
    The twin brother of one makes two
    But they say we need to beat you
    Your little lies make time unfold
    Your little lies keep the mystery told.

    A tall tale of ambition and power
    Your ruse is the greatest of the hour
    Our minds had been bought and sold
    Now you tell us we should buy gold?
    But what we don't know can do harm
    Now Dipper's ringing Bill's alarm
    A little lie sent Ford to the moon
    A giant lie unravels soon.

    A little story and you'll get all the power
    Gone a thousand years, blasted from your tower.

    Chorus:
    You're telling Vicious Lies
    Your power would know no compromise
    You're telling Vicious Lies
    But we see truth with our own eyes

    Weirdmageddon descends upon the world
    Your web of lies and deceit unfurled
    With everybody looking to the sky
    Not knowing its caused by a lie.
    You sent some monsters to beat us down.
    Whilst you sat on your throne and enjoyed your crown.
    Another lie and you sealed our fate,
    For all time it'll be you we hate!

    A little story and you got all your power
    Gone a thousand years, blasted from your tower

    Chorus

    Chorus
     
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    well good job ;) but there is some thing that i would change about 1st 5 lines. Give me some time and i will think about that :)
     
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    Currently working on my rewrite of Scissor Sisters' I can't Decide. Not a song for kids, may I add. It should take me a few weeks. Who should I make it about? Or for? Vicious Lies, see above, was rewritten to be about Bill Cipher. I'm thinking that Discord should be the one who is "singing" I can't Decide.
     
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    Strike that. I'm putting I Can't Decide on the back burner.
    Instead I'm working on Stronger than You, from Steven Universe. I've heard it, and many parodies. I know it has potential. If anypony is willing to help?
     
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