Help me Choose!

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Which one should I choose?

  1. A Dream Within a Dream

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  2. Ira

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  3. Zelus

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  1. Lyipheoryia

    Lyipheoryia The Sparkle Princess Pants of the Glitter Kingdom
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    I need to choose one of the three below poems for school. Which one do you think is "best" in your opinion? (Ignore the numbers beside the titles-it's the word count of the poem. )It's for presentations:

    A Dream Within a Dream-144
    BY EDGAR ALLAN POE

    Take this kiss upon the brow!

    And, in parting from you now,

    Thus much let me avow —

    You are not wrong, who deem

    That my days have been a dream;

    Yet if hope has flown away

    In a night, or in a day,

    In a vision, or in none,

    Is it therefore the less gone?

    All that we see or seem

    Is but a dream within a dream.



    I stand amid the roar

    Of a surf-tormented shore,

    And I hold within my hand

    Grains of the golden sand —

    How few! yet how they creep

    Through my fingers to the deep,

    While I weep — while I weep!

    O God! Can I not grasp

    Them with a tighter clasp?

    O God! can I not save

    One from the pitiless wave?

    Is all that we see or seem

    But a dream within a dream?



    Ira-224

    Ira, or anger;

    Anger, or wrath.

    I am a Wraith,

    A monster,

    A creature of the future,

    A shadow of the past,

    I exist to remind-

    To reprimand-

    To aid.

    To guide you along paths,

    To help you choose.

    I will help you evolve

    Feelings,

    Emotions.

    Into me.



    You give me power-

    So I’ll be honest,

    I will give you parts

    Of me.

    I will give you Ira,

    You give me strength.

    You cry and tear at life.

    I will aid you-

    In your conquest.

    You want me,

    though you are taught-

    To refuse me.

    To accept me,

    I possess you.

    You ask me-

    And I answer.



    You are I.

    I am you.

    You talk of pain,

    Depression,

    Hatred pity,

    Dangerous love.

    You speak of horror,

    “How could they?”

    The world has turned

    Against me-

    Therefore you, too.

    You ask me to take away

    The pain

    And the angst.

    You are filled with frustration.



    You cry for me,

    Beg for me.

    I grab you, and

    Take you home,

    Befor eyou can be taken

    By sadness-

    My sister Tristitia;

    Where dire circumstances go.

    You are on earth,

    And she will bring

    Demons of Hell.

    You call to me,

    And push me away as taught.



    I embrace you:

    All you feelings

    All your emotions

    And I will give you Ira.

    Rage, to take it all away.



    Zelus-246



    Zelus, and jealous

    Same meaning,

    Same ideals

    “I want that”~

    Is how they describe me.

    Something wanted,

    Yet not owned.

    They call me a feeling

    An emotion

    A “thing”

    But what am I?



    A monster

    A creature

    I am alive.

    An organism

    Something that lurks

    Only within darkness

    I reach and chase

    Trapped by own ambition

    Confined by self-boundaries

    I break free,

    Then keep imitation

    Clone-initiation



    I am a shadow

    The shadow

    Your shadow

    A hidden gem

    To seem non-sentient

    Fake,

    Dead,

    I seem to follow you

    You think I wish to?

    Every movement you make

    I repel

    But I make it too

    Because I must

    I’m your shadow



    Everything you force me

    To do

    Everything you force me

    To act

    A pulse in my heart

    The start of a volcano

    About to erupt

    I could stop it,

    Or I could let it run

    And explode

    Because it hurts.



    It hurts to follow you,

    It hurts to imitate you,

    It hurts to be your

    Shadow.

    It stings when they

    Talk to you

    Acknowledge you

    Follow you

    Like I don’t even exist.

    And then the lava starts

    To leak out

    To boil

    To hurt

    It hurts.



    Then it starts to change

    I start evolving

    My brothers and sisters:

    Ira to anger,

    Tristitia to sadness,

    Dolor to pain,

    Inlacrimati to resent,

    Invidia to envy,

    Begin taking over me.



    What I feel is what you get;

    What you get is who you are;

    Who you are is who I am:

    Jealous.
     
  2. Malon

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    The Ira one, for sure. Of course, it's your choice. That is just my suggestion.
     
  3. Mister Asmodeus

    Mister Asmodeus The Element of Asmo
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    Gonna need a little more info on your assignment. Oral interpretation?
     
  4. Lyipheoryia

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    Just a reading of it. Nothing else :)
    I don't really care how long or short it is, so don't judge the poem by it's length, rather by it's information.
     
  5. Mister Asmodeus

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    Then I'm gonna go Poe. I love that bastard.
     
  6. Lyipheoryia

    Lyipheoryia The Sparkle Princess Pants of the Glitter Kingdom
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    So I've got two votes for Zelus, two for Poe, and one for Ira. Okay. Let's wait for the tiebreaker.
     

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