Tekkie-The-Quiet

The link works fine... you did click on it right?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7402636/1/bZombies_b_A_bSpotters_b_bGuide_b

*Shrugs* As you say.

I just was saying though that genocide and my little pony, don't really mix.

I did do "Zombies: A Spotter's Guide" on fanfiction.net if you're interested in which I listed and described the different types of zombies and how to fight them

Well for one, I'm right.

Second, you seem to be overly emotionally involved in this.

Third, you don't see the humor in that? While I applaud your attempts at writing with a disability, I am monstrously evil and have no sympthy for you what-so-ever. Likewise I have nothing to gain or lose by this. I gave you tips. I happen to be a published writer, an experienced fan fiction writer, and have many positive reviews to back the whole thing up. Yes I am a bit of a self indulgent *squee!*. My avatar should have clued you into that. Fortunately part of that is a complete apathy involing other people's opinions of me. It's up to you whether you take my advice or not

Yes. Yes I do.

Dislexics of the world, untie!

Here, read this thread on my writing tips.

http://www.everypony.com/forums/showthread.php?2566-Writing-Tips

Even braindead zombies have a goal. They want brains. And anyone on the receiving end of that is working towards either getting to safety or finding a way to stop them.


Zombie ponies can be done... but seriously you went about it the wrong way. Why would your main character have been out killing Zecora's parents in the first place?

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Okay there are a few other things. You need to learn punctuation.
You never explained why they had guns, how the heck that would work, where the zombies came from, why Twilight sent him to town, why the Cutie Mark Crusaders had a gun, why the princesses couldn't have fixed the zombie problem in 3 seconds, why Cloudsdale was safe, why they didn't use the elements of harmony, where the fire breathing dragon/zombie destroying flame thrower was, why your guys had a gun or barbed wire for a cutie mark, etc.

You also did not seem to have much of a grasp on the series itself. The whole "Friendship is Magic" thread doesn't really mesh with "genocidal gun nut".

Perhapse if you wrote a fic based on the main characters and no original ones.

[video=youtube;nFdLtoKQ7HU]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nFdLtoKQ7HU&feature=relmfu[/video]

Well it seemed as if you had no ultimate goal. It just seemed an excuse to have the pony blast the s*** out of people. And not even in a funny way

[video=youtube;fcbazH6aE2g]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fcbazH6aE2g[/video]

After Celestia has been distracted... Twice, you must go at her. She will be too busy to mind you, so you go and do what you do best. Leave it to me then... This gotta be fast.

Explaining what?

On a side note... I had to take out part of yours... it was making me feel very depressed...

I posted the MST in the same thread as the other one... you aren't going to be happy.

happy bday Tekkie!!!

Not a parody. I change nothing from your original story. Did you click ont h video link at the begining? That should show you what I mean

Go to the comedy section of the fan fiction area and you'll see th last one i did

I do believe I shall MST that 28 neigh's later fic of yours... if you don't mind.