chocolatechip

Hey chocolatechip, how's it going? How's school? :)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7196173/1/

Here's a fanfic that I know my bronies will like! Enjoy and tell me what you think!

I didn't realize you were a chef! I've done some cooking, but nothing formal - used to work in lots of restaurants, and one day I was asked if I wanted to learn how to cook, and I figured that was better than washing dishes, so I learned a little. Actually, I like to cook.

Ah, well, I just wanted to thank you personally. I've never had anyone give me reputation before. Hmm, I think I better come up with a standard for giving out reputation myself. I'll have to think on that.

Hey Chocolatechip (mind if I call you CC?), did I read that right? You're the one that gave me some reputation?

Hey Chocolatechip, I've been meaning to friend you for a while, but seeing you in the Rainbow Dash club cinched it for me. Habba Habba Zoot Zoot.

As I said, try and look at the other fictions in the section, and maybe try and work the dialogue into the story, acting as a backdrop. Maybe base the story around the dialogue? It's up to you.

Hey there chocolatechip.

I'm really sorry to say your fan fiction couldn't be accepted. It was just too short. It was interesting, and could be a good read if developed further, but it was essentially just a short dialogue.

If I were you, I'd check out the length of the other stories in the section. Honestly, I'd take your story and continue writing it, as it did seem rather promising.

I look forwards to hearing from you again!

Luprony.