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"Those other guards? Please, those jokes are wimps compared to me, or even you!" Fire took down one last mutant until he looked around at the...
"I'm not sure what the Doctor's thought process was with this!" Fire yelled out, "but it's too late to worry about that now!" He landed on the...
"I say we try and find other survivors and maybe some supplies in Canterlot," Lightning said, "Or what's left of Canterlot..."
Firebreeze flies over the crowd of freaks, using his fire trail to cook them. "I only like my freaks well done!" He yelled out, "That has to be...
Fire looked at the mutants that surrounded him and his comrades, "Come on, boys! We don't need weapons! We've got hooves!" He yelled out as he...
(ok, whatever. It still bothers me for whatever reason. Moving on...)
"Alrighty, then." Lightning said, looking for her saddle bags.
(you can't hallucinate and recognize a thing that doesn't exist, and all of those things don't exist in Equestria.)
The necklace began to lessen Lightning's pain. She stood up just as Snow disappeared, "Where is she going?" She asked.
(it's hard to go with it when he keep mentions ipods, L4D, and the tank mutation!)
(i'm sorry guys, but I can't do this anymore... Sparky's been throwing a lot of weird and irrelevant stuff into the RP and I honestly can't take...
Lightning stood up, feeling hurt all over. She walked to the pond and dunked her head in the water to wash some of the blood off her face. She...
"There's no way we'll just be able to stroll over to the Doctor's office. There are more guards, more crazies, not to mention these mutants are...
Firebreeze took care of the rest of the messed up mutants quickly and painlessly. "Killing the doctor won't be easy. The riot's still blocking...
"I... I didn't even know about those ones..." Fire said, disturbed, "They've all probably lost it by now..."
"It was random." He said, "They basically just grabbed you and ran."
Fire turned to Icy, "You can stay here with the nuts, or I can try and get you home. Your choice."
Fire turned to sparky, "Because you're a nut and I still have a job to do!"
"Well, your Icy friend over here, I'm getting him outta here." he began, "he was part of an experiment of some sort awhile back. The Doctor...
Firebreeze felt a shock run through his body. He shook it off and realized something, 'Oh, damn! the experiment!' he thought. He shot a pulse of...