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Firebreeze maneuvered the explosions with ease, laughing all the way
"what was that?!" firebreeze thought. He shoke his head and kept going, full speed
Firebreeze darts back, grabs the pony, puts her on the other side and darts back, slightly exhausted, but still determined to win
As Firebreeze darts past he yells "DON'T TRY AND CROSS THAT RIVER!"
Thinks again, "it was probably quickly made while I was gone... Too quickly... Denied!" he darts over and down the mountain
Firebreeze looks at the tunnel ahead, he thinks, "I've lived here for years, when did that tunnel get there?!"
as he began to fly fast, my flying trail of fire began to appear. "WOOOHOOO" he yelled as he flew through some molasses.
Firebreeze prepares to fly. His face turns to determination. "you wanna count down to start the race, or shall I?"
He hops off the bench "yeah, you ready to race?"
Firebreeze looks towards haze smiles and replies "Hey."
((sorry, I never thought of that...))
((since he was 10 minutes early*))
Firebreeze walked to the center of ponyville, saying goodbye and 'you're welcome' to his earth pony friend. He sat down on a nearby bench and...
"ok, meet me in the center of ponyville in an hour or two. See ya then." *He gives a friendly smile and starts flying towards ponyville*
"well, a race sure sounds fun. How about later today?"
"sure, what would you wanna do?"
"I dunno about you guys, but I've gotta head back to ponyville soon. I promised my friend i'd help him with some stuff"
"I've met the group before. they're a nice group of ponies, well, in my opinion."
"well look who made it back."
((well, crag, ive got the wrong mindset XD. Scratch everything I said))
