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You did neither of these things.
"Th-Thank you. I don't want to be left for death either. Th-There's safety in n-numbers..." He replied. "...Or so I'm t-told..."
"Let's go, then." He replied, holding her hoof.
Narrowleaf sighed. "...So do we stay here?" He asked.
"Fine." He replied. "Bolt wants me to look after you and Flitter. Before I go get the others, anything you need to tell me, Brisk?" Narrowleaf asked.
"What, Bolt?" Narrowleaf replied. "What now?"
Narrowleaf sighed. "I w-was going to ask y-you to stay, if th-that's alright..." He admitted.
"Part of me hopes he gets his ass kicked..." Narrowleaf said.
"It's Bolt we're talkin' about. Of course it's stupid."
Narrowleaf took a step away. "Are y-you gonna leave after y-you're better?" He asked.
"Yep. Th-That's what he said." Narrowleaf said.
"Y-Yeah. He says he's goin' to fight." He said.
"...He said the Order's back." He replied.
It was a yes. "ok 5 times this has happened today" What did?
.....Maybe.
Invader Zim. No question.
"...I'll ask Brisk." Narrowleaf replied. "Brisk, Bolt wants Flitter and Star to stay with us. What do you think we should do?" He asked Brisk.
"Okay..." Narrowleaf mumbled. "...I'm s-sorry if I scared you earlier."
"I'm s-sorry..." He replied, flinching.
"...D-Do you want me to carry y-you?" Narrowleaf asked.