Separate names with a comma.
"Golden, hello? I'm sorry, & you dropped this."
"Golden, you dropped this...", shade said, hoofing him the paper
"Narrow, are you okay?", shade asks, then reads the poem,"I think he's gonna need the poem back.", shade then took the poem, & flew up to golden
I think I got that already XD
Shade comes back out, & flies up to narrow,"here, I'll take it back to him..."
Maybe you shouldn't have said she was being sarcastic lol
"Who cares.", shade said, walking back inside
"See ya later, or better yet, not!"
"I built this leg out of scratch!", fabrica snapped
"Music, & speech are two different things!"
"Well, whoever taught you did a terrible job.", shade snapped
Dark snores more
"I know what sarcasm is, but you confused me, I didn't say anything sarcastically...", shade stated sternly
Dark started to walk up closer to violet, then passed out due to lack of sleep, & landed on the ground, snoring
"Sarcasm?"
"I'm Shade, it's a pleasure."
Bryz fell asleep, with Yuri, & flare in her arms
Shade jumped back upon hearing goldens voice, then she asked,"who's this?"
"Alright.", dark said getting up slowly, & walked over to violet
Shade came out in a hurry, not seeing golden, & asked narrow,"what's wrong!?!"
