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"I'll let you in when Brisk is calmed down. Don't argue." Bolt yelled at the door.
"I refused to bring Leaf. Casualties, you know? Stay close to me." He said, moving extremely close to Flitter.
"I'm coming. I see you." Bolt said. "Flitter! Up here!" He yelled, landing.
Bolt called Flitter. "I told Addie we would pay for the kid. Tell me where you are, honey." Bolt begged
"I'll come get you if Flitter doesn't wanna kill you." He promised flying off
"Ok." Bolt said
"I need to go talk to Flitter.
"I'll pay money to support the child if she delivered..." Bolt said
"No. Its just bad...."
(No. No no.)
Bolt backed up a few steps. "You...you?"
"Dude...I was an ass." Bolt admitted
Bolt cringed, realizing exactly what he had done. He froze, nor knowing what to do. "I'm...really sorry Leaf. I didn't want Brisk and you to be a...
"Do you really wanna know?" He asked
(hello?!?!?!?)
(Kk. I'm dreaming of it...like and she just went" back the buck off and watch, loser")
(I'm in a dream. I think it should be like a foreshadow for our two characteers)
"No...I'm not..." Bolt said, digging his hoof into the ground
(I'm with you)
"I'm fine...". Bolt said
