Anime Schoolgirl Fluttershy

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  1. Melancholy

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    I'm not the greatest artist in the world, but I thought I'd share some of my work here. I drew this picture a little while ago, and I thought it was cute so I should share it first. It's Fluttershy in one of those anime schoolgirl outfits. I know it's not perfect, but I like it. Any positive comments or constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

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    I was expecting a human or anthro.

    The skirt seems a little off. Like its push to the side of her tail, unless it has a hole for her tail. Then it's fine.
     
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    Yeah, I imagined it having a hole for her tail. Thanks for the comment! :smile:
     
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    Thats pretty legit bro, well better than I can draw
     
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    That's really good, the only thing I can really say you should change is the tail, & it's not suppose to touch the 'ground', but it's great, keep up the good work, & I look forward to more of your works!
     

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