I really like the linework although, some of the detailing looks odd to me. They seem too heavy, making a few on her body look like scuff marks. Perhaps it's just my eye. Also, RD9K! You return! This is good news of the celebratory variety. I shall party for the requisite amount of time. Yes. I'm really boogying all the woogies now.
The ones on her face are scuffs. Her body is chubbiness/fat roles. She is an tomboy after all so I didn't really aim to make her neat or "pretty". More or less spunky and sporty and thick/curvy so that's why its not flat or smooth. And thanks everyone,