Name: Drawing KorDell Sign 4th Nickname: Drawing, Sign, Drawing Sign Date of Birth: 4/25/1999 Age: 17 Born: (Confused on this one) From: Manehatten Occupation: Self employed, student of Luna Appearance (Pictures are always nice as well^^): Personality: nice, funny, friendly, smart Background: work in progress
This is actually in the wrong place! It should go in OC lists, and not character sheets. OC lists is a place for you to store your personal OCs, and Character sheets is where you get people to sign up for your RPs. I'm going to move it for you. ~Moved!~ On topic, I really like your color palette! The only thing I might suggest is that your character seems a little Gary Sue. He's nice, funny, friendly, smart, an alicorn AND a student of Luna. Is this guy perfect? If not, it might help to name a few of his flaws in his personality, and maybe try to stay away from connecting your characters with canon ones, at least on this site, or maybe even just make him a pegasus or a unicorn. Also, it's a little hard to judge a character if we don't have any background development. I know you said that it was a work in progress, but the sooner you can update that, the sooner we can get to know him. Did you draw his picture yourself?
