I'd like some feedback...

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  1. Parsons206

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    Hello everyone, I got bored & decided to draw this in school:



    I'm not the best artist & this is my first time drawing a horse, so, I'd like some tips & pointers to help me next time, thank you...

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    Its great...a bit of a real pony but it looks fine...
    The only thing that sticks out to me is the muzzle...maybe a bit bigger (if you know what i mean).
     
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    Thanks, yeah I know, I had troubles drawing the head most of all, & it's realistic cause I like to draw more realistic things, or it'll set off my OCD
     
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    Very great drawing my friend
     
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    Not bad, dude! I wish I could draw more realistic stuff.
     
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    Thx you two, I updated it to have better face, & other less noticeable stuffs
     
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    XD....yeah i know what you mean...but with my ADD i tend to (stay in the rules) if you know what i mean....i like a boundary wherever i go...hence why i am planing to join the ADFA in years time...
     
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    Alright, lol, I'd still be able to draw a cartoon pony, it jus' might bother me some
     
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    It's pretty good, but it lacks a sense of depth to a certain degree.

    Like, for example, the details you've drawn on the muscles, while yes, they are there, they don't need to be drawn in as heavily as you've done. In fact, for a detail like that, a line isn't even necessary. A great way to imply detail without actually explicitly drawing it out is to use shading. If you were to shade the area just underneath that line, and removed said line, it'd still give the impression of it being there but it'd also give the picture more dimensions.
     
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    Thanks zephyr, I'll try that out, if I still have the picture...
     

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