Just managed to finish the last of this set.. still have soooo many to do, but im wondering if the style for them is alright. http://ikasama.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FIM-Tarot-WIP-261954666 Individual cards are here: 0:http://i.imgur.com/Bh2Rm.png 1:http://i.imgur.com/HHjxb.png 2:http://i.imgur.com/tjTrM.png 3:http://i.imgur.com/LIbIi.png 4:http://i.imgur.com/WQNp7.png 5:http://i.imgur.com/mu9NQ.png 6:http://i.imgur.com/gBsIM.png 7:http://i.imgur.com/fLoJ7.png 8:http://i.imgur.com/RSIXE.png 9:http://i.imgur.com/e6l1R.png 10:http://i.imgur.com/e1mF7.png 11:http://i.imgur.com/phcBy.png 12:http://i.imgur.com/RyXmp.png 13:http://i.imgur.com/iCueC.png 14:http://i.imgur.com/YbT3w.png 15:http://i.imgur.com/w3KiG.png 16:http://i.imgur.com/rIZao.png 17:http://i.imgur.com/xBxSk.png 18:http://i.imgur.com/BePdi.png 19:http://i.imgur.com/rucCo.png 20:http://i.imgur.com/Hf38h.png 21:http://i.imgur.com/iHLws.png
Well, i have to say they only lack a coloring. The lineart is definitely good enough. Do you work digitally? Because i see that these aren't scans but photos. And you can't really get that much detailed feedback from photos as much as you can from digital works and/or scanned ones. On the lines and the shading, i'd suggest you make them all have some kind of outline - so it's easily seen - some take 2 or 3 seconds for me to realize what they're doing, and the outline drastically helps when it comes to seeing the shape as it is. On the anatomy, it is ALMOST what it should be. #17 and #9 are a prime example of how the rest of them should be (for instance - Rarity's neck and front body seem too bulked to be her body. She is elegant and should be "curvy". Another thing i don't really understand is - Why is Derpy the Devil? And why didn't you include Discord? It seems to me that Discord would fit the Devil much better. But, all in all, the best concept in all of these is the Fluttershy's one - but her hair doesn't resemble her as much as it should. The hair is what makes her so cute and stand-out. It might also be because of the perspective that some of them seem strange to me - I suggest you buy a scanner. Seriously, the scanner is the first priority to showcasing your art online. Afterwards come photoshop and the tablet.
