Great work! I have a bit of criticism for you though: Her horn feels a bit wonky, maybe you should draw a full horn and then cut holes in it rather than making the horn in one stroke That wisp off her forehead doesn't follow her hair. Maybe point it up a wee bit? That's all I got. Nice piece of work there!
I like this kind of art style. I can't put my finger on it, but it needs a little something extra to make it sparkle. Hmm........I got nothing.