I know it's not the best ever but I'm new at this. http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/041/6/6/in_the_end_by_thunderdash454-d5uj7cy.jpg http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/030/b/1/rarity_by_thunderdash454-d5tb6ut.jpg http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/028/1/7/luna_by_thunderdash454-d5t2d9v.jpg http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/030/a/a/rarity_s_armor_by_thunderdash454-d5tb88b.jpg http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/032/3/1/applejack_s_armor_by_thunderdash454-d5tiwzb.jpg http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/036/3/3/fluttershy_s_armor_by_thunderdash454-d5tzk3n.jpg
The first one is pretty bad, the second one was good, but you need to work on the legs. The 3rd was good, but the tail was too big, the last three was bad. :3
That is actually some pretty good drawings right there! But work on your coloring as these thin white lines between the colour look somewhat bad
so if the coloring was better on all of them then what would it be good or bad only based on style and shape?
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/070/c/4/in_the_end_final_copy_by_thunderdash454-d5xqpzl.jpg Re-did the lines, what do you think?
The lines are cleaner now, which is a great improvement. I suggest you look up some guides on pony anatomy. Your muzzles and skulls are a bit wobbly.
If anyone wishes to see the rest of the page the link is here ---> http://thunderdash454.deviantart.com/
he is kind of a cross between this demon being and a pony. The side view shows only 1 but there is 2, but the way that the drawing is drawn is that the 2 are side by side.
