My Music - Opinions Needed!

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  1. I_Ride_Ponies

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    The one problem I have with uploading music to sites such as NewGrounds is that no one ever seems to comment. At most, I'll get about 2 people saying the music is all right.

    But I know it won't be the case here.


    You guys are the nicest and most talkative people I've met on the internet, and I want to know what you think about my music! I know there are some music creators on here, and if it's not too cheeky I will probably ask them for some help, because I cannot make dance music to save my life!


    Anyhow, these are my two latest pieces, both of which are at my highest standards so far. So please, have a listen, and tell me what you honestly think.

    Thankyou!



    http://soundcloud.com/stevensparkes/glutch


    http://soundcloud.com/stevensparkes/rock-ma-lock
     
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    Okay, I'm on my phone but when I get home I'll check it out and give my honest opinion.

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    They both sound great :D
    but on the first one the part where it has the 3-4 intervals playing (the dun dun dunn) and the last note (the last dunn) you should have it slowly fade and echo until it reaches the next part of the interval
    Overall you did a good job on those two
     
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    Glutch is all right, but there's too much going on. Layering is nice when done effectively, but there's just a bit too much here. The transitions, on the positive side, were brilliant. I think the drop off into silence can also be effective, but I would suggest fading into silence every time as opposed to the cut-off I'm hearing now.

    I have no critiques for Rock-ma-Lock. I think that it's done very well overall. Nice work on this one!
     
  5. I_Ride_Ponies

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    Cool, thank you guys! I'll have a quick tinker with the middle part of Glutch, thanks for your feedback. :)
     

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