Second or third pony drawing.

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  1. AppleBuck

    AppleBuck A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    Aaaaannnnnndd..... Fluttershy!

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    Random drawing one day, roughed in pencil, gone over with a Bic ink pen.
    I think it's okay, but it could be better. Criticism encouraged!+
     
  2. Luprony

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    Wow, that's really good. Your style of drawing is nice and neat, it just looks right.

    Also, adorable as heck, which is always a plus.
     
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    nice job on the drawing
     
  4. Affection

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    Wow! That's amazing!
     
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    Great job! I'd work a bit on the eyes, though. They seem a bit off.

    Apart from that, it's great!
     
  6. AppleBuck

    AppleBuck A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    I'm digging it less and less as I look at it. Her head is too round, her right front hoof is kinda odd, her eyes are all off.. Blah. Back to the *rimshot* DRAWING BOARD!
     
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    Don't ever throw your drawings away. You've got to look at what you did wrong, look at what you did right, then learn from it. Besides, months or even years from now, it's always interesting to see how your art has changed, and got better.

    Unless you have so many drawings they cover your floor. In that case, dude, throw some in the bin. Or even better, use them as wallpaper. Or build a paper tank. Oh my god, a paper tank would be wicked.

    But yeah, keep posting your drawings here, I really like your style, and I'm interested to see what else you've got!
     
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    I liked it...because it's Fluttershy!

    Seriously though, it's good to me, though her nose did look odd at first glance...but that's just me!
     
  9. AppleBuck

    AppleBuck A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    Yeh, I'm in the process of drawing AppleBuck now. It should be interesting. And I agree, her nose is too wide, and her nostrils too far apart. And apparently I can draw a pony, but simple flowers? Not so much.
     
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    Well, the flowers look fine, they just seem like...they're on the ground just laying there..

    Can't wait to see AppleBuck!
     
  11. AppleBuck

    AppleBuck A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    Random five minute sketch of Applebuck.
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    I feel the exuberant need to convey size, for some reason. *bigpony*
     
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    Awesome bearded pony! I like it! I can't make out what the tattoo is supposed to be though...*squints*
     
  13. AppleBuck

    AppleBuck A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    Koi. A loose interpretation of my actual tattoo.
     
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    I must say AppleBuck, those are some impressive drawings.

    I can't wait to see more.
     
  15. AppleBuck

    AppleBuck A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    Well thank you. I appreciate the comments, and I hope to continue impressing.
     
  16. AppleBuck

    AppleBuck A Pony Every Pony Should Know

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    Update. Again, only pencil and such, but it's looking a bit better.
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    Not digging the giant cutie mark in the backround. And I suppose if all the ponyfolk want me to keep updating and whatnot, I'll need to find my scanner back. Maybe the cell phone pictures of drawings won't cut it for much longer.
     
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    Looking good, I like the addition of shading, it seems to add much more depth to the drawing.
     
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    These are awesome! Good job you guys, I wish I could draw with a fraction of the talent you have.
     
  20. AppleBuck

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    Feh. Bearded pony is garbage!
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    I think I do a lot better with smaller pictures. I'm still happy with Pinkie, and it's been like.. A week or two. The longest I've kept a drawing. Everything else with the exception of the old Fluttershy drawing has ended up in the garbage. As I've said before, being a perfectionist, I could draw something Lauren Faust couldn't tell from her own and I wouldn't be happy with it.
     

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