http://www.everypony.com/forums/sho...-House-of-the-Crimson-Fang-(Signups)&p=460929 ^^Here you go. Narrowleaf trembled in the back corner of the mess hall as the other members of the House of the Crimson Fang fed on blood. He whimpered and cradled his knees.
Shade looked at narrowleaf,"are you gonna feed or hide your face for the rest of the day?", she asked softly, then started drinking blood quickly & making sure to keep from make a mess all overt the table
Carbon sat on the rafters of the ceiling, drinking through a large straw. His tail flicked as he glanced towards Narrowleaf for a moment. He jumped down, landing with a painful sounding thud. "Newbie, newbie, thirsty, bloody, newbie..." He chanted in a sing-song voice.
"Thats not singing, this is."Silent said standing on the table and singing "Oooooohhh, the newbie in the house refuses to drink cause he's just a newbie!"
Rosy finished her meal and carefully wiped her face with a silk handkerchief. "That was delicious. I just wish that this was not so horribly untidy! After so many years, I really SHOULD figure out a better way to do this." She sighed, and looked around at her fellow vampires. She was far from impressed.
(Jackie, there's the 100 character minimum. STRIKE 1/3) Narrowleaf shook his head violently. "I-I d-don't want t-to be here! I don't w-want to!" He mumbled, continuing to cradle his knees.
Shade shook her head in disappointment,"you're going to starve & waste away if you don't feed…", then she dragged a dead unicorn over to narrowleaf,"feed…", she told him
"Well kid, your here anyway HAHAHAHAH!!!!".Silent laughed so hard he fell on his stomach and was trying not to barf and upchuke his blood, he swallowed it back down and sat down.
"You should do what I do, Rosy. Drain them into a portable, sealable container. Very efficient. Not as fresh, but hey, these ponies nowadays are barely natural meat! Hehehehe." He leapt onto Silent's back, then back up into the rafters. "And honestly. I don't think any of us can sing. Hehehehe."
Rosy walked over to Narrowleaf and slapped him. "Oh, DO be quiet! Your whining is ruining my digestion! You are a vampire! A god among insects! Why are you behaving this way?"
Narrowleaf jumped back and yelped. "N-No! I don't want to be one of you! Y-Y-You're all a bunch of freaks!!" He screamed.
"Yeah, I haven't sung in 37 years, & I don't sing in pony either…", shade said, & grabbed a new pony, starting to feed once more,"I can try to sing of you'd all like…"
Rosy sighed. "Honestly... why do we keep getting these weaklings? If you do not wish to be one of us..." She pulled a stake from under her cloak. "...I would be delighted to cure you."
"Yea, Rosy PUT THE KID OUT OF HIS MISERY HAHAHAHA!!!"Silent laughed stomping his hoofs on the floor and was trying to see the look on Narrow's face, He then dragged another body to him and sucked all the blood dry.
(But you didn't have it originally. I'm basing it off of the original draft. You get one freebie.) Narrowleaf gagged and attempted to run off, only to trip over a pile of kegs, each filled with pony blood. He got up and ran off. He sprinted to the front door, and opened it. He hissed at the sunlight and dropped to the ground, burns appearing across his face. "H-Hurts..." He mumbled.
Shade giggled softly,"you're not very bright are you?", she asked, then quickly grabbed him & pulled him out of the light burning his flesh away
Carbon was at the door standing in front of Narrowleaf in a few seconds, blocking the sun, ignoring his burns. "Little one, return to the house." He growled before shutting the doors.
Rosy pulled her cloak down over her face and ran after Narrowleaf, but Shade got to him first. After he was safely back inside, she grabbed her mortar and pestle and began making a salve for his burns. "You have much to learn, young-blood. That was your first lesson. The sun is your enemy."
