A new day.
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Hey Everypony! This is a little poem/short story I wrote when I was out in the field these past 3 weeks. It's a little grim so SPOILER TAGS!! Enjoy And please give feedback. corrective criticism is a must for improving ones story telling capabilities.
I was sitting in the mud, a river on my cheek.
I acted for the better but was it worth the loss?
A light pierced the sky, bruised knuckles, the carbon reeked.
The night began to fade and a new day would be made.
But the day was not my day for my day had been made a light
A simple light to illuminate my brother in the wake of the fight
His faced embellished with scars, blood, pride and memories
I killed my brother this day for I led him into the fray.
Though I thought to myself "should I really take the blame?"
"Or mark this day as the day I avenged my brother..
..And secured a new day?"
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