BronyDefenda Blog #3

Published by SykoWolf in the blog SykoWolf's blog. Views: 261

So after all my current experimenting with music, the main criticism is that it is too repetative, and sounds more like a video game track, so i updated a recent one called "Dark Techno Hearts" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uJsa9r2cDyo&feature=plcp

I believe i removed some of the repetitiveness from it, and i like it the most so far. I still have a LONG way to go, and i "think" ill stop making music for youtube until i get FL 10, which will be in about 2 weeks, i may put something out if i believe it is REALLY good, otherwise im gonna take a break and just keep practicing until i build up my Music skills enough.

And i WANT criticism, id rather that then for someone to tell me its good when they dont think that, i NEED to know what i can improve on so i can learn, THEN hopefully i can become better at his ^^

Thank you for reading and please listen to the Remixed track i put a link to up above. Id like to know what you think and what i should improve on ^^
Dec 10, 2012
  • Glorious Rex's Apostle
    Glorious Rex's Apostle Dec 10, 2012
    Well, it's a LOT better than the original. That's for sure. But me... well, I like a harder kick.
    At 2:15, you just go straight to a whole 'nother sound. I feel as though fading it in and keeping the kick would have been better. 2:44, again, very strange transition, but it sounded pretty good.

    Gist is work on how you're transitioning from one sound to another. It also sounds very prerecorded, but you know, you're still learning.

    At least I could listen to this one all the way through, so take that as a compliment.
  • SykoWolf
    SykoWolf Dec 11, 2012
    Thank you ^^ See this is exactly what i want , CRITICISM, not just a friendly "Oh that was good" when it really wasn't lol So thank you Alias for the advice, ill keep trying till i hit on something good ^^
  • SoulEmber
    SoulEmber Dec 11, 2012
    If you aren't already, you should join My Little Remix. The musicians there can be a great help.
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