Cute/Heartwarming AppleSeed Friendship Fanfic

Published by StereoPony454 in the blog StereoPony454's blog. Views: 391

I tried my best to write a fanfic with lil ol Babs & AB. If you have the time, give it a look, and tell me what yea think!

http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=77388
Nov 28, 2012
  • StereoPony454
    StereoPony454 Nov 28, 2012
    Edit story may not work right, mah bad
  • Hero Mode
    Hero Mode Nov 28, 2012
    I commented on your story on Fimfiction go check out what I said when you have free time also check out some of my stories I also have a Fimfiction account.
  • Eight Star
    Eight Star Nov 28, 2012
    Err... well, honestly... while a good idea, I couldn't read far. Proper form dictates making a new paragraph for a new speaker, and a few too many missing punctuations make it difficult for me to read on. Sorry.
    It starts out cute, with a fair premise though, so I'm sure it's a nice story. ::S:
  • Prince Darkmoon
    Prince Darkmoon Nov 28, 2012
    Great job, this was extremly cute.
  • Dilly Star
    Dilly Star Nov 28, 2012
    I like the premise.

    You have some grammatical errors. Consider asking a friend to help you revise.
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