Guncakes progress: My side.

Including the lyrics I have been sent, here is the current progress of the song.

[rap]
Reloading a six-shot, run and bag it.
Running out of time till I've done and had it.
List'n to the sounds of the shotgun blitz,
Playing this track in a couple of clicks.

Checkin' for the update, comin in's static.
Running in circles, heads goin frantic.
Caught on the frontlines all to do is panic,
When the last shots off, gotta find more quick.

All my life been lockin and loadin,
Waitin for the day to watch the barrel explodin,
There's a gun in my hand and its aimed at your head,
so you better get running, one wrong move and your dead!

[chorus]
Gunning for the dead, till the empires fall.
If you wanna reach the top, then you'll have to crawl.
Tryin be the matyr yet feel so discraced,
its an all out war, its a bloody arms race.

If you need them dead just give us a call
We'll give you the guns to show them all.
We can do anything for whatever it takes.
Its an allout war, for a piece of guncakes.

[rap]
Starin down the barrel of a loaded gun,
Off the war field, kid you've had your fun.
Gun pack impact as you try to run.
Dead smack, cant look back, or else I'm done.

Back in the town, Everypony's got a frown.
Till the sun comes up, in thier blood they'll drown.
Massacre, outta here nothing else is clear.
but the worse thing out there is not only your fear.


So yeah, thats progress on my side.
Changes due.
See ya!