Lunar Shield Character Sheet (Revised)

(so i have upon many complaints decided to revise my main ocs character sheet)
Name: Lunar Shield
Nickname: Lunar/Shieldy
Race: Unicorn
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Coloring: Black body with midnight blue ragged man and tail and blue eyes
Cutie Mark: Blue shield with 2 light blue stars above it and a crescent moon inside it
Bio: Lunar and his twin brother Golden Dust were found by Princess Celestia on the streets of Canterlot when they were only 5 years old. Tia raised them as her own children. Lunar later went off with golden dust to Canterlot University, reciving a PhD. in Science and Combat Strategy. tia on Lunar's 20th birthday gave him a Crescent moon necklace to protect him from simple corruption spells. Lunar later became leader of Equestria's military.
Special Skills:Shadow Magic, Battle Strategy, Swordsmanship
Occupation: Head of the Equestrian Military
Personal Life: Single at the moment
Quote: "I am Lunar Shield master of shadows and i must ask you this: 'You afraid of the dark?'"
Weaknesses: Can get cocky t times, Anger issues
(Is this better. Both parents are mysterious.)