Red vs Death

hey this is one of my rap battles i made. i would like some feedback if you dont mind.
DEATH!!!
VS
REDMON FROSTS!!!
BEGIN!!!

(Death)
Of look, it’s the 77[SUP]th[/SUP] Sentinel,
Didn’t you know that the rest of them fell?
That’s right! You’re the last of an ancient race!
How does it feel to have history blown in your face?
I’m the best of the best and that ain’t no lie
Just run on home and cower like Fluttershy!

(Red)
Oh, I get it! You’re. A. Big shot. And now I know why.
Everything you said was just a big lie.
By the end of this, I’ll leave you bawling!
I may be the Sentinel, but you’re the one falling!
That’s right! You can’t keep up with me!
With those veils I’m surprised you can see me.
You think you’re the biggest and badest pony
But everypony knows you’re just a big phony.

(Death)
Ha! Don’t make me laugh!
I don’t need my scythe to cut you in half!
Making me bawl? Well, that’ll test ya.
You seem to forget that I’m as big as Celestia!
Maybe In time you’ll finally see,
That no matter how hard you try you’ll never beat me.

(Red)
Oh sure I will! Just watch and see!
And YOU seem to forget about the Elements of Destiny!
All that power and you can’t even use it
Not unless your pimp, Tendalem, chooses.
Guess what, Vaden’s on my side of the line
Sorry Death, better luck next time.