Pixel's Music

Discussion in 'Music' started by Echoax, Nov 8, 2011.

  1. Echoax

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    So, I made a song. I'll post more songs as I finish them.


    Tell me everything you don't like about it.

    [video=youtube;ZzlWb0SM-Nk]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZzlWb0SM-Nk&feature=context&context=C396118bADOEgsToPDskKuBp7jUP9p6UUySGyhufZE[/video]

    Look new song


    [video=youtube;bJuqyrhrAR0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bJuqyrhrAR0&context=C396118bADOEgsToPDskKuBp7jUP9p6UUySGyhufZE[/video]

    Download
     
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    It's nice at all. But is some places it sounds empty. Mm... Can't explain more specifically.
     
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  3. Yetione

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    sounds nice, it sounds a bit like bitpop :derpe:
    very good work
     
  4. Frost

    Frost Would You Kindly?

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    I'm not very knowledgable about the various sounds and levels and stuff that make up music, but I'm very picky about what songs I like or don't like, and I liked it.

    As far as critiquing goes, I'm nto very good at that because I can't really put it into words since
    I don't know music jargon. But I'll try.

    The high notes seemed to overpower the low notes, couldn't really hear what was going on in the background. Also, it seemed kind of repetitive, it was more or less the same notes all the way through, far as I could tell. Songs need a distinctive beginning, middle and end.



    Sorry, wish I could be elaborate on that but I'm no expert when it comes to music. I liked it though, it just needs...more.
     
  5. Double Rainbow "Dash"

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    The only thing that annoys me is the title "Hixel Pope"

    Everything else is awesome. :derpe:

    Still needs more wubwubwubwubwub.

    :omg:
     
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    That would be my lack of skill. Thank you. Next attempt shall be better.

    Thank you. Not sure what bitpop is though.

    I've got a few ideas for this next song. Hoping for it to turn out better.

    It wasn't dubstep. It doesn't have wubs.

    The title was Dreaming in Nightmare Land.

    Don't insult the pope or I'll excommunicate you.

    Thank you.
     
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    It just needs more wubwubwub, even if there isn't any.

    :derpe:

    Pope thing, meh... :shrug:
     
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    I'm with DRD, needs more wubwubwubwubwubwubwubwubwubwubwubwubwubwub.
     
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    No WUBS. maybe on the third one.

    I am pope, I control all things .
     
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    Look new song

    Fl studio was being a jerk, I forgot I even had been working on it. I found it and just threw what I had together.

    enjoy or don't, It doesn't matter.
    [video=youtube;bJuqyrhrAR0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bJuqyrhrAR0&context=C396118bADOEgsToPDskKuBp7jUP9p6UUySGyhufZE[/video]
     
  11. Rain Lullaby

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    obscure 8bit sounds...
    Keep it up!
     
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    Thanks, I need more practice though.
     
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    You should try to make a similar sound to that of the videos "When I'm...."
     
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    Far beyond my skill.
     
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    :omg:awesome!

    That is all.
    I will probably need to start work on my next piece soon :derpe:
     
  16. Rain Lullaby

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    If you don't try... you'll never know whether you are able to make that sound.
    Anyway... if that sound does not attract your attention.... :)
     
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    Why thank you.

    I didn;t say I wanted try. I really wanna make music like tombstone.
     
  18. Rain Lullaby

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    I see your point. It was just a suggestion.
    As I said above... keep it up

    I want a Pixel-Xan duet!!!

    By the way, I wrote "attach your attention" instead of "attract your attention" (my head is telling me: "go to bed")
     
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    DoDo1234 The Awkward one

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    Liking Happiness Paradox! Nice one, pixel! I like the style of your songs a lot, but I do think you could make them a little more lively, have more happening in the background to make it that little more interesting. apart from that, Got nothing. Nice one! :p
     
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    I know. I'm still learning. Music has taken a backseat to drawing. So, I just do it for fun.

    THanks though.
     

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