"Love is something I had and lost" A poem by BronyMarine343

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  1. Himura Kenshin

    Himura Kenshin Roxas, The Keyblade Wielder

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    Love is Something I had and lost
    A poem by BronyMarine343

    Love is one thing I've never understood.
    It seems like one thing I might never understand.
    For when I get loved, It just doesn't feel right.
    I once had a girlfriend in the beginning of my eighth grade year.
    She was beautiful. But, a month and a half later, she said she didn't feel like I was her man.
    I then fell into a dark abyss. An abyss of depression, loneliness, and my self-esteem was no longer there.
    Love destroyed my happiness. It destroyed my self-esteem. I now feel like I'm a reject, a human being with no life.
    I wander the halls of high school as a sophomore. Life isn't the same for me anymore.
     
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    Woona Part of the Community

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    Woah, if you're so crushed after a relationship only lasted for a month I think you should see a school councilor or someone, man. I mean, you're only, what, 15? Life is just getting started for you, don't let something so pointless get you so far down.

    Unless you're making up this character, in which case - carry on, I guess.
     
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    Perspective works wonders.

    Not a bad poem, by my standards. Keep at it!
     
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    Himura Kenshin Roxas, The Keyblade Wielder

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    Reviving this thread!!!

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    I'm not crushed by just that relationship, I'm crushed by the amount of bullying and hate I have gotten in the past 6 years... Also, I'm 16.

    P.S. I'm over the girl now.... I still fee as though I don't belong anywhere I go sometimes..
     

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