want to make a FanFic of Episode 2, help..

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  1. zora-heart

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    Well, Look I just end to see the Episode 2 of the season 2........and this Idea come to me, I want to doit before I lost the spirit!!
    As you see in the episode (WAS SUPER AWESOME!!!!), there just ONE thing that dissapoint me, or rather something I didnt expect: the way they found the Elements of Harmony.......I mean.......there are in the book.....WOW (fake wow XD) wath adventure(sarcarsm).
    So, this Idea come to me..........if I make a fanfic were they need to find the Elements of Harmony in a more huge adventure??, search the spread elements in the Chaotic Equestria??
    I never had make a story before, Never in all my Life......but this Idea....I-I thought that have.....a lot of potential no?
    I-I Dont want to lose it, I-I........I GONNA WRITE IT!!!!!

    BUT........I need help *shy voice*.........because... the English is not my forte XD, I need help of......EDITORS, that help me to evaluate my writes and check the words I use, to see if they can....improve it, put better words and quit part that maybe there not necessary........you know.
    As I never wrote a story before, of course it gonna tame me, a lot of time; What I want too, is that the Editors that help me.........I accept.....IDEAS from them, Ideas to improve the story.
    SO......................Somepony want to Help me????
    (i gonna be out for a time, like 3 hours)
     
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    Well, i can only wish you the best of luck with that.


    I don't mean any offense, but your english doesn't seem to be very good. So unless you plan to write in your own language (assuming it's not english), you'll have to perfect your english first if you want to impress people with a fanfic. If you write your fanfic like you post on the forums, i'm afraid editors won't be a big help...

    What you COULD do, is write the fanfic in your own language, then ask a proper translator to translate it. But that'll be alot more work.
     
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    yeah sorry, i hate sounding mean, but your English does need some work. i like your idea though. i can already imagine some parts and scenes. i would help...buuuuut i busy with other stuff... like running a minecraft server and photoshopping a ton of stuff... but yeah write down your ideas, i bet we can find people who can pull from those and then write a story from it. ask affection, he made a fanfic as i remember.
     
  4. zora-heart

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    XD, yea I know that....... *heavy sight*.....thats why I looking for help XD
    And Indeed, look a proper translator to make my work could be more hard XD
    I already start to write........but....well, I........ I gonna keep and see what happen
     
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    If you write it I will try my very best to help you with it.


    As your first post said
    I would try my hardest to help.
     
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    You want to help me Pixel??...................thanks..........really, means..........much to me make this.
    But I think that......start that..........in monday, tomorrow I gonna improve in the details and some other things.
    I gonna said, that the one who help me.......... I like that they share his ideas to make my fic better ( or maybe I better said, us fic)
    Anywhay, thanks for offer you Pixel, I think in Monday gonna post what i have.
     
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    I will always offer to help anyone they only need to ask. So if you have anything that you want to discuss about your story or whatever just PM me.
     
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    Looking forward to helping you as we discussed too! I'm sure you'll write a great fic!
     
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    I see two options.

    You could either do your best to type up the story in English, then give it to a native English speaker who can clean up the grammar while leaving the content intact, or write it up in your own language, then give it to a fellow Spanish speaker who can speak English more fluently, who would be willing to type the whole thing out.

    I'd be happy to help you with the first instance, but what you do is up to you.
     
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    Well..............I think that then.......is better Discuss here in this Thread, or you thing is better via PM´s?.
     
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    I'd say this thread is the right place for anything on the topic of it.
     
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