Equestria's fall (NOT COMPLETE NEED ASSISTANCE)

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  1. Deathbrony

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    (Before I start, this is my first fan fiction)

    Back in the time of the rule of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. Everything seem'd happy and cheerful, until darkness came to Equestria somehow it
    grew in the deaths of Manehattan. Of cource Twilight Sparkle "The Princess of Friendship" tried to stop it, but soon she failed. The darkness was to strong, it was overwhelming to the Mane 6 along with the most valuable ponies of Equestria.
     
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    What exactly is it you're looking for?
    Ideas? A proofreader?
     
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    A second author and I need ideas and yes a proofreader
     
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    So a collaboration, then.

    Not my cup of tea, but good luck anyway.
     
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    Ok then.
     

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