A Mindscrew in Progress....

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  1. pplwearsocks

    pplwearsocks New In Town

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    hello. person. i'm working on a fan fic that is pretty different from everyone else's. here's a summary i just made up in a couple of minutes. the finished story wont even be close to how cheesy this will be.

    "No. This can't be happening. I didn't. No. Can't forget. My name. Is. No no no. Please stop. Where are you taking me? Remember. Remember. My name. Is Caesar…Stone...and I am a person...."

    Just recovering from his amnesia and imprisoned for a death that he may or may not have caused, Caesar will for the last few days of his life relive his uncovering of a dictatorship that ran since the beginning of history, the genocide of a race that he has a forgotten connection to, and his persecution by the dark backdrop of Equestria where everyone is ignorant and there are no friends. Alone and abandoned, Caesar will discover the harsh reality of the origin of his species and a betrayal that caused the extinction of his kind. But when tragedy strikes the lives of him and five others as the world turns against them, they will all be forced to ask the same, unavoidable question: Is the truth worth it?

    that's it. id love to read any comments or suggestions. thanks everybody.

    so yeah..."Caesar Stone" was the best name I could think of for this type of character, and the stupidest, but i am open to any better names you can think of.

    if you're wondering where i made up that name, just know that two people named Caesar Rodney and Thomas Stone signed the Declaration of Independence.
     
    #1 pplwearsocks, Aug 1, 2012
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  2. DanSze

    DanSze Yard Sale Cowboy (on CD)
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    Yet another human/pony fic.

    Protip: These very rarely work out, if only because people are prejudiced against them.

    I wish you luck though. Dark is always good.
     

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