Thunder Dash: Failure(WIP)

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  1. ThunderDash

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    Here's a beautiful WIP I'll debut sometime in the future. It's a what-if song that describes the emotions of Twilight Sparkle failing to save the Crystal Empire.

    [SOUNDCLOUD]https://soundcloud.com/thunder-dash-alternative/failiure-wip[/SOUNDCLOUD]
     
  2. Nerdus Pegasus

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    I think the piano has a bit too much reverb on it, but that's just personal opinion.
    The quote ended so abruptly, it rather ruined the moment. I suggest adding a bit of delay on it for an echo effect.

    Otherwise, it's a very beautiful piece.
     
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    Yeah, I've been trying so hard to fix that quote. I really hope before I debut the real thing, I find a way to extend it so the reverb can fade properly instead of that annoying cut-off. I'll also turn up that piano as well.
     
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    Alrighty, I await the final version!
     

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