Darkstar64's Music Thread

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    I like Listen To Me Cry because of it's very different chord progression, compared to many other genres. Much electronic music has very repetitive, overused progressions, and even other genres, especially pop music, do it too. Also, it has a great chill-out feel to it, yet seems somewhat happy. The delay effect fits in very well.
    I don't feel that the title is too fitting, due to the song not really being that minor, or dark.
    It could use some more dynamics, for example, during the mid-song break down (around 2:06), it could be softer, and then it can build up to another part. Just another thing to think about for next time!

    Afraid of Myself is another one where I like the chord progression. Once again, it has a chill-out feel to it. It has very much in common with Listen To Me Cry, only a bit more lively. This one also seems to have a bit more dynamic variation in it, yet could still use more.
    Once again, the title doesn't seem too fitting too fitting, as the song doesn't sound that unhappy.

    I would suggest experimenting with cutoff with your songs to give the more repetitive parts of your songs some feeling of flow in it.

    Anywho, I like your style of chill-out. Can't wait to hear some more!

    (If you don't know what some of my musical jargon means, or how to do something, like adding cutoff, just ask.)
     
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    I've now added the 2nd edit of Afraid of Myself, link above! Enjoy!
     
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    Love that mid-song breakdown. Rebuild to 3:30 was awesome.
    Great job!
     
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    New song "Break Free" has been added above! Enjoy!
     
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    Quite repetitive, but I still like the calm feel to it.
     
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    New song Crusher added above! Enjoy!
     

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