Nightmares

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  1. rerabox

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    I had awoken one night from a horrible nightmare. It was my fifth one this week I can't stand it. I went to counseling but to no avail it just won't stop.

    Usually I have a mixture of dreams and nightmares. However, after going onto a website that I forgot because I'm forgetful, I have just been having non stop nightmares every night. My nightmares have been where I am in a small black room and there's a brown door in front of me. I open the door and I start to walk down the hall but everything goes horribly wrong as I start to hear sounds of screams, my mom's to be exact. I keep walking and the walls start pouring blood and soon they are a dark crimson color. I start to run however, the hallway stretches further and what seems like a few feet from the end seems like a few miles. I start to hear hoofsteps behind me. I turn around and somepony with a knife is following me so I start to run more and more but then I feel a sharp pain in my hind leg. I check and the knife is planted deep inside my leg and even though I try, I can't pull it out. The mysterious pony comes up to me and I get bucked in the face. As my head hits the ground I see the pony pull out the knife and they begin to jab it into my chest. I try to crawl away but it's always no use. They then deliver a final slice to my neck and I drop dead.

    Anyway I woke up and went to my parent's room however, since my dad left it's just been me and my mother. I know she wouldn't like to be woken up at this hour so I just go to the kitchen and grab a drink from the fridge. I sit down at the table and calm down and I hear hoofsteps coming towards the kitchen. It's my mom and she asks,

    "Honey, what are you doing up? Do you know what time it is?"

    I respond, "I know it's late but I had another nightmare and I can't go back to sleep."

    "Maybe you shouldn't be watching those scary movies."

    "Oh please, I'm pretty sure a bunch of scary movies won't give me nightmares."

    "Fine. Do whatever you want, but please try to go back to sleep, okay?"

    "Okay mom, will do."

    I kiss her on the cheek as she goes back to her room and I stay up all night.

    The next day comes by and I'm tired like crazy I can't even keep my eyes open. I continued my average everyday routine which is really only getting groceries with whatever bits we have left over.

    As I go down to the market I see somepony familiar. I look closer and they appear to be the same pony from my dreams. I run in fear back to my home and I lock myself in my room. I look outside the window and the pony is gone. Was I having a hallucination or were they real? I couldn't tell. I decide to get some more rest hoping the nightmares would be over, but they weren't.

    The weird thing was this dream seemed so real. Instead of a dark hall, it appeared to be a hall in my house and instead of a dark room, I start off in what appeared to be my kitchen. I wake up and run off to the kitchen to grab a large glass of cider and I hear somepony coming down towards the kitchen. I quickly draw my attention to the doorway of the kitchen and I see the pony from my dream however, I wasnt sure if I was dreaming, but I grabbed a knife hoping that I could change the nightmare or whatever it was. I saw the pony running in fear as I laughed and said, "HA HA I'M IN CONTROL NOW HA HA!"

    The pony ran off towards the hallway and I followed behind them. I couldnt let them run for a weapon and continue the nightmare so I decided to stop them so I tried to throw the knife at their back but missed and hit one of their hind legs. It was weird because it was the same leg from my other nightmares. I went up to them and they started to crawl away so I pulled out the knife and held it in my mouth. I swung down at their chest screaming, "YOU CANT HAUNT ME ANYMORE!"

    They started to scream a very heart breaking scream, but I ignored it. I decided to deliver the finishing blow right to their neck. They lied there lifeless as I panted and smiled happily knowing that the nightmare was over. Suddenly everything started to change and I saw everything going back to normal. I knew it was a nightmare, but maybe since I wasn't sleeping it was a daydream. I looked down at my coat and saw blood all over me and on the knife I had in my mouth. I looked down towards the ground and saw my mother there dead. The knife dropped out of my mouth and I took a few steps back. I kneeled on the ground and held my mother in my arms. "OH CELESTIA WHAT HAVE I DONE?!"

    I screamed in agony as a single tear fell onto her.
     
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    Well, that was creepy.
     
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    Thank you I was trying to focus more on the twist at the end but thank you
     
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    Well, that's was... Interesting?

    It was an entertaining story to read...
     
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    Thank you for your opinion have a cupcake I made it myself x)
    *Gives "custom made" cupcake*
     
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    I-umm...

    *takes cupcake & inspects it*

    you sure?
     
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    Yes im positive the special ingrediant is love and a little bit of drugs so eat up :D
     
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    I-wait, drugs... Sorry, take it back...

    *holds out*
     
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    JUST EAT IT *pushes cupcake into mouth*
     
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    MMMFFFF!!!

    *spits out & wipes off tongue*

    whats wrong with you!
     
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    *smacks head with a frying pan hard enough to make him pass out* go to sleep it will all be over soon
     
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    *stands ground*

    do that one more time!
     
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    Tee hee okay *smacks head again*
     
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    *punches*

    grr!
     
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    *grabs knife and swings at* you wont escape
     
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    *Pulls out dire flail, & swings*

    What you got!
     
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    Come at me bro!
     
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    *swings both ends of flail*
     
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    *gets cut* agh *runs away knowing he cant win*
     
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    *holds up direflail, & a katar*

    i win! Woo!
     
    #20 Parsons206, May 9, 2013
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