Prologue: Main character's first appearance: Fang- Black combed-down hair,greenish-blue eyes, about 6'4 always wears a hoodie to protect the Golden Dragon tooth that his Father had died protecting. Madison- has Blonde hair, about 5'6, has her mother's Pearl necklace that her mother gave her. Chapter 1- Fang stepped back as the Dark Raiders (D.R.) cornered him. Behind Fang was a cliff that Fang knew that if he jumped,he would die. As the Dark Raiders were cornering him more, he had no choice but to jump. As Fang jumped he heard a voice... "Fang!" a voice whined. "Fang, it's time to get up!" His sister, Madison, said. "OK...i'm up..." Fang said as he walked downstairs. Fang went to the kitchen to get some cereal and he heard a buzzing in his ear. "Huh...?" Fang said as the buzzing stopped. Fang ignored it as he got his cereal and went to Visit Madison. "Hey Madison." Fang said. "hey Fang." Madison replied. As Fang was eating his cereal there was a knock on the door. "I'll get it..." Madison said. As Madison opened the door, she saw a couple of humans. The girl had red hair, blue eyes, and around 6'3. The boy had brown hair,greenish-blur eyes, and around 6'4. "who are you?" Madison asked them. "Can Fang come to the door?" the girl said in a French accent. "OK..." Madison said. "Fang!!! someone is at the door for you!" Madison said it Fang. Fang got up, puzzled of who could need him. As Fang went to the door, the girl said, "Fang, we need your help." "With what?" he humbly replied. "You see, our town of TidalPool is being attacked by Dark Raiders..." the Girl said. "What!? we have to help them! Let's go!" Fang said as he grabbed his sword and rushed out into the snow. Chapter 2- As Fang, Goya, and Raynka traveled to the town of TidalPool, Fang wondered why Goya had requested his help and not some other person close by. Fang shrugged it off, he guessed it was because she couldn't find anybody. Fang told Madison to stay home, "it could be dangerous." he told her as he traveled into the snow. At long last, they reached the town of TidalPool. "here is TidalPool?" Fang asked Goya. "Yes... we must hurry." Goya said as she walked inside. Raynka just walked on ahead without saying a word. Fang wondered why Raynka didn't talk. Probably because he doesn't like to..Fang said to himself as he walked in the town. Fang noticed that the town was in shambles. "What happened here?" Fang asked Goya. "The Dark Raiders raided this village, we don't know why..." Goya answered. Fang suggested that they should split up so they can locate still-living villagers. Fang walked everywhere, but couldn't find everybody. "Where are they all? There should be at least a couple of living people..." Fang said as Dark Raiders cornered him to a wall. "What!?" Fang asked Goya, who was in the lead of the army. "Fang... i'm sorry... i had to do this..." Goya said as she raised up a mace and struck Fang in the head, knocking him unconscious. "Well done, Goya..." a voice behind Goya said. "L-Lord D!?" Goya was astounded that the Dark Raider leader himself appeared. "I shall keep my promise... I shall restore your brother's voice..." Lord D said, and then added, "that is... For a price..." "W...what is it?" Goya asked Lord D. "The boy... give him to me... he holds more power than he realizes..." Lord D said, "unless i take you and the boy? I won't kill him if you give up your freedom." "...No! You won't take him, and you wont take me!" Goya said as she lifted Fang over her shoulder and ran away. "Wretched girl..." Lord D said as he held out his hand and a shadow froze Goya in place. "What!?" Goya said as she struggled to get free. Lord D swung his hand sideways and Goya fell with a thud. Lord D took Goya and Fang and took them to his castle to be sent to jail. Chapter 3- Coming Soon!
i WILL add more of the story... probably going to be... 6 chapters or maybe more... so... yeah, just pointin that out there...
