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"Sorry," Max mumbled, as they headed down into the tunnel, "I know you didn't mean any harm." She stayed close to him, appreciating the support,...
They gathered the most damaged looking books, the ones that were beyond reading, and stacked them in the fireplace. Taffy pulled a sparking device...
Max glared at him a bit, obviously not in the mood for such comments. It was hard enough for her just being back there...
Banned for thinking you could sneak such an error past me!
What if I made an oath to stop them from making people keep their oaths? Then what would happen?
Banned for not even bothering to assign me a pronoun! :o
Well now see, that sounds like it could have been the prelude to something fun, and these fuzzballs wasted it on something as mundane as making...
^ Should know that reluctantly agree with him on this particular occasion...
You were forced to do something by that? I'm disappointed Lio...
Criminal damage and enforced Oath-keeping? That sound's awful! What kind of monsters are they!?
They walked for hours, the muddy ground making progress slow, but eventually the came across a cliff, rising up in front of them. Max stopped, and...
Pfft. Oathkeepers. Sounds like a boring bunch; remind me never to go to one of their tea parties.
"Alright then, let's get going," Max said, nuzzling Jay back a bit, and wrapping her coat around both of them. She walked close to Jay as the...
Full-naming me? Wow, either you're wearing a wire, or you really are upset...
Max noticed Jay shivering, and wrapped a hoof around her, trying to share some body warmth. She'd have to get her some more clothes to wear once...
Max looked where he was pointing. How had he seen that? "Okay..." She said, looking around, half expecting somepony to burst in on them, "Well,...
"How can you tell?" Max asked, looking around, "This fire hasn't been lit for a while; I would have said that whoever was living here is long gone..."
Max went to the table with Jay. There was a bag on the floor next to it, and a number of personal affects on the table; clothes, a toothbrush, a...
Max blushed a little at the kiss, then led them inside. Nopony seemed to have been inside since the bombs fell; there was a table, a bed, a small...
"Oh, it ain't so bad!" Taffy said, smiling, as she wiped her hoof, "It must've been real grand way back when." She looked out over the balcony and...