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"Thunder~!" Eris giggled, pushing him playfully, "There are ponies watching!" She knew she wasn't in her true form, but she still didn't like the...
I did in the end... :(
Eris blushed a bit more, feeling his magic on her tail, and smiled at him. "Thank you, sweetie~" She didn't want to attract too much attention...
Eris nodded and tried again, this time managing to pick it up. Her face lit up with delight, but then, as she brought the cup to her mouth, she...
Eris smiled and held his hoof happily, kissing his forehead when he rested his head on her shoulder. She frowned and stuck her tongue out in...
Eris sat down happily as they reached the cafe, and ordered a pot of tea from the crystal pony that came to serve them. These ponies were actually...
Eris blushed, feeling a little foolish being carried around like some foal. She appreciated the thought, but still... "You can put me down now...
It had been a while since Eris had had to walk this far; by the time they made it to the crystalline city, her hooves were pretty sore. The view...
Lone looked at Thunder questioningly, raising an eyebrow. "Look, Thunder... is it? You seem like a nice enough pony, but I'm not really into...
Eris giggled, and was still blushing a little from the kiss when Lone and Courage returned. Thunder definitely seemed to be getting more...
"Aww, that's sweet~" She said, kissing him back on the cheek. "Yeah, hang on," She rested a hoof on his shoulder and tried to click her talons,...
Eris smiled, curiously. "Hmm, no offence; but you're handling this better than I thought you might. Those other pegasi got extremely upset when I...
Can I have your leftover tea then?
*eats the tea* Wait, no, that's not right...
She grinned and nuzzled back, before turning into a crystal pony once more. "What would I do without you here to remind me? Ok, now lets do...
After they'd finished eating, Eris floated all the dishes into the sink, where they started cleaning themselves. "Ready to go then?" She asked....
Kiss for playing peacemaker :3
To me it's creepier than any of those; they're all trying too hard. Yours looks like it's trying to lull me into a false sense of security...
Definitely not just me then. I feel a little better about it now.
Banned for not even calling me criminal scum! Amateur...