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"Hey you are adorable like that" Lunarina said tickling his cute little form with her wings
She scoped him up and placed him on her back as she ran down the hall laughing
(I see your point in fact she is my main oc Lunar Shield's daughter making her Luna's Granddaughter. forgot to add that Anyways: here is the fixed...
alright i think we should start casual and later make it adventure so here is my oc: Name: Nightfang Gender: Mare Pony: Night-guard style bat-pony...
"Qiuke lets get out oif here." Lunarina said
Lunarina laughed and said "I'm going to die from that moment" Black replied "Please don't"
"I know." Luna twinkle said
Lunarina luna twinkle and black all laughed
"Hey stop that." She said laughing. :Lunarina said "Yiou know we are ione lucky royal family." "Indeed" Black said
"I dont know." Lunarina said tickleing the little luna
"Now what are we going to do>" Black and Lunarina asked
"Hello again" BLack said. "Thank you for ubnderstaning." Lunarina said
"Sorry its you know.. that time" lunarina said soon they reach the others
Lets just get back to the others before Lunarina slips up." Black said "Your right i do say so." Lunarina said
"No you don't" She said "Your wings. put them down." Black said
"You dont want to know it trust me." Lunarina said "You okay?" Black asked him
Lunarina said "I know but i promised to keep it a secret." Black was standing there "I almost gave it away." she said
She ran off down the hall blushing madly. "I am almost gave it away." She said to herself
"Yup i'm good. just excuse me." She said trying to get past them
Black thought back on what she did and her cheeks turned red as her wings puffed up. Lunarina just wanted to do something
