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Rose blushed slightly, then asked celestia,"how much are you paying us?"
Around the time nightfall comes the couple made it to the cave, which was big enough to fit a large bear (don't worry, there's no bear…)
Equinox giggled & started to the cave once more
"Oh, he just left, he went that way…", equinox said, pointing the wrong direction
"Really? Who?"
"Yeah, what brings you to the Everfree?"
"Umm… good, you?"
"Hmm…", blitz said, then followed red
Equinox looks over to them
"Umm, it doesn't matter to me…"
"Th-thank you…", equinox replied shyly
"Just leave it be…"
"It's not important…", equinox said, blushing more
"Nothing…", equinox quickly replied
Equinox blushed & hid it
Equinox rolled he eyes & looked over the picture
"I think you've paid enough, you don't owe me anything…", rose said, then walked over to steel
"You don't owe me anything, mother...", rose says, still holding chrysalis
Rose kissed steel,"I'm glad to have you back…", then spoke to chrysalis,"I'm sorry, mother…", giving her a hug
Sounds good to me, I look forward to it!