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(Sure, & it was much better)
Equinox pried herself from the unicorns forelegs, then decapitated him
(Yep....."
"So ya wanna have me find the way out?"
"Okay, good night, red…", blitz said softly, laying down on one side of the tent
The unicorn tried to walk on but failed to
"Thank you…", shade says, nuzzling timestopper
"If I was stuck I'd help, yes…" (I can't read it)
"So, just because we captured her doesn't mean she's heartbroken…"
"Anything you want for breakfast?"
Rose whispered in steel's ear,"you're not the first to think that…"
Xeno woke up the next morning, & stated blushing
Rose kissed steel lovingly, turned into her pony form
Xeno slowly started to relax, falling asleep in bolt's forelegs
"You traitor!", chrysalis yelled at rose before having a bag pulled over her & tied up
Xeno blushed even more, returning the kiss,"Th-thank you, bolt…", then she buried her face in his shoulder again
"Destroy her horn!", rose commanded, grabbing a bag from steel's saddlebag
Xeno blushed more, burying her face deeper in bolts should,"I-I l-loved it…"
Rose looked away again & sighed, chrysalis chuckled again & flipped steel under her, returning the kiss
"B-between than b-before…", Xeno replied blushing, buying her face in his shoulder