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(Oh god why [fixed]) xeno hugged bolt back, still blushing,"I love you too…"
Rose blushed slightly, then Chrysalis smiled at rose,"I've been looking for this one, I'll be sure to repay you my child…", then she brought steel...
Chrysalis looked at steel with wonder, then gasped,"thank you…", she told rose, giving her a hug & grabbing hold of steel
"I-it's alright…", Xeno said, her blush still there
"A pony? What for?", chrysalis asked, then rose replied,"a gift, to my queen…"
Xeno's face turned a very bright, vibrant red, & she buried her face in her hooves, her muscles turning very tense
Rose tapped steels chest, then chrysalis spoke,"come forth, child!", she projected, rose walking forward,"what must you bring to my attention?",...
"Maybe a little harder…", Xeno replied, blushing
When they got to the center there was a large mossy stone building with wooden doors, when rose walked in chrysalis was on an old steel throne...
"Th-that would b-be nice…", xeno replied, showing bolt her back
Rose walked out, closing the door & started walking to the centr of the hive, many more changelings there
"O-oh yeah…", Xeno said, her face quickly turning red
Xeno hugged bolt back, blushing slightly,"what tonight?"
"It'll be suspicious if you lead…"
"What's wrong?", Xeno asked, nuzzling bolt lightly
"Umm, alright… but she hasn't seen me with you, & I doubt she'll learn of me 'controlling' you…"
"I hadn't thought of a plan, all I know is to not reveal to chrysalis I'm a changeling"
Xeno smiled at bolt, she had forgotten what she told bolt,"good morning bolty…", she said levitating a plate of French toast
"Y-yeah, you were just sc-scaring me…", rose said, muffling the word scaring
Xeno was awake & making French toast